I have loved this story:):)10/10Author's Response: Aw, glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Ooh!! Very good!!
Is Matt a werewolf?? He is, isn't he.
“But that's cause you were a Horcrux!” That sentence is so cute:):)
Good fanfic, I will keep on reading!!Author's Response: He might be! You'll have to keep reading to find out. Haha, glad you like that line. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Hi. This is great! Good job, very nice writing skills. Good luck
with other stories in the future(you definatly should write more)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I'm definitely writing more. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I just relized it's April first, but I'm not joking, banana is used for wand, purse instead of face, big toe for mouth, and garden shed instead of arm. In beyond the shadow, if you go to right after Kenzie leaves and Amy is with Brandon, you'll see a few of them used.Author's Response: It was for April Fool's Day. It's all back to normal now. But thanks for pointing it out! Report Review
I think someone's been messing with your stories. In this one and Beyond the Shadow, random words are popping up, especially eyebrow. I just thought you ought to know.Author's Response: It was a part of the April Fool's Day prank we pulled on the site. ;) It's all back to normal now. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
This fanfic is actually quite entertaining compared to other Albus Potter ones I've read, I'm always looking forward to more chapters!Author's Response: I'm really glad you've been enjoying it! I hope you like the rest. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Ok, this is bad...very badAuthor's Response: Yep...not good at all. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I have a bad feeling that Washburn or Washborn, whatever his name is, is using Polyjuice Potion to disguise himself or herselfAuthor's Response: That's an intriguing theory! You'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Yeah, it was obvious Matt is a werewolf. I guessed it right when you described him.Author's Response: Yep. I wanted the readers to know but not for Al & his friends to know, because we know Remus through the HP books, but Al never met Remus. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Wow, that was an unexpected turn. Wonder what the Potter boys will think...Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see to find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I really liked the beginning. Nice job.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
And someone needs expelled over this one!Author's Response: Indeed! Haha, people so rarely ever get expelled from Hogwarts. Except Hagrid...poor Hagrid. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Poor kids just can't have a normal year, can they? You'd think someone would do something about all this abuse, too? And a nonverbal 'Puff was it, a few chap's ago? Hm.Author's Response: Nope, can't have a normal year at all. Or any normal years, really... Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Dont' you just hate it when canon pops up later?! I worked and worked and Jo says Teddy isn't a werewolf. Pardon me?!
This has become enthralling, and I'm too sick to sleep, so on we go! Liking it more and more, honestly, despite my initial misgivings. And that's saying a lot, considering the NyQuil!Author's Response: It's such a love/hate relationship! I'm always a fan of getting more canon, but when it makes my stories non-canon... I like keeping things canon. I think it would've been interesting if Teddy had been a werewolf. Aw, I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
The eclair was masterful, but I think it's too obvious to be Willinson. Poor Matt...Author's Response: I loved writing about the eclair. So funny! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I'll leave you a review, then since you asked!
It's hard to come up with something to say about each chapter, which I've finally realized.
I like the characters, although I was a touch disappointed to see another Gryffindor fest. I like the slow buildup so far, and Matt especially. Soft spot for furry little problems. Onward!Author's Response: I completely agree about it being hard to come up with something new for each chapter when I read fics that are long-since completed. But thank you so much for leaving one!
I think you can make a case for them all being in Gryffindor or them being in different houses. The Weasleys were all in Gryffindor in the books, after all. Mainly I did it because it makes things easier. :P I have a soft spot for furry little problems, too! (That might be obvious, given how many of my stories focus on werewolves). Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
You're an amazing writer. I vaguely remembered the OC names from somewhere, and once you wrote about Matt's not being able to be treated with the Wolfsbane, I instantly thought of one of your other fanfictions, Beyond the Shadow. Your stories are amazing, intriguing, and they keep me hooked. I had read Beyond the Shadow a few months ago and it's one of my favorite next generation fanfictions. I believe Beyond the Shadow is a spin-off from Amy's point of view, right? Although I have now realized all the characters' fates, I love that I still want to read on and know what happened. I also really love how you're smart enough to incorporate all these little details seperately in each of your stories so I can have those "aha" moments. I'm excited to read on and keep reading the rest of your fanfictions :) Report Review
This story is amazing it is as good or maybe even better than the original Harry potter novel. Report Review
It was really good.I read a lot of albus potter fanfiction and you got the characters right. Of course the friends change from story to story. Report Review
I love this book
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*grins* The Junior Cert. results (our equivalent of the O.W.L.s) came out the day I started reading this story.
I was wondering about Harry teaching DADA the following year, as he probably has enough to do with his Auror duties and needed to be there that year because of the murder. Still wondering about the motive for that actually. So there wouldn't really be any need for him the following year. I'm looking forward to seeing the new Charms teacher and if there is a new DADA teacher, him or her too.
If this is 2016/2017, then Amanda's family should have come to Ireland the previous year instead. *grins* There SHOULD be big celebrations that year, but knowing this country, they probably won't get around to planning much.
Really wouldn't be hard for the next Charms teacher to be nicer.
Mr. Eckerton sounds like he'd have got on well with Harry and Ron. Or the Marauders.
Those speeches sound perfect. They are exactly the kind of leaving school speeches I've heard in real life.
It seems weird that they'd be presenting diplomas though. They haven't even got their exam results and besides I don't think British schools present diplomas just for finishing secondary school, so I wonder if Hogwarts would. Mind you, I don't think British schools have Graduation at all, but still, it seems weird to get diplomas when they could still have failed the N.E.W.T.s and have to repeat. And what are the diplomas for? They haven't passed anything yet.
Yeah, I'm getting a bit nit-picky here and I don't think J.K. Rowling said that much about the Graduation ceremonies, except the stuff about the boats, unless I missed something (which is distinctly possible), so they may well get diplomas for all we know. It just doesn't seem to fit with a terminal exam system. We had a Mass and speeches and were given little angel pin badges, but no diplomas or anything like that. We got certs posted out to us like a year later with our exam results (we got the results before that, but just on slips of paper the first time).Author's Response: That's a cool coincidence! As much as I loved having Harry be the DADA teacher, he really is too busy to do it long-term. Plus, he understands that his kids would rather not have him be their teacher.
I hope Ireland is able to have huge celebrations that year! That would be cool. Haha, nope, it won't take much for the next Charms teacher to be nicer.
Mr. Eckerton would've gotten along great with Harry, Ron, and the Marauders. But he's significantly older than Harry and Ron, and is actually only a few years younger than the Marauders.
I'm glad you liked the speeches! I never gave one at my own graduation, so I had to guess.
I've had mixed reviews on the graduation thing. I know most British schools don't do diplomas or graduation or anything, but I wanted to do it. If I wrote it again, I'd probably not do the diploma thing, but I'd still do the ceremony.
J.K. Rowling said that she wished she'd been able to do a graduation scene, but she didn't say what it would entail besides the bit about the boats. I took artistic license on this. :P After all, plenty of people change things about Hogwarts (and some in far more drastic ways) in fan fiction. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
*laughs* Harry sounds like our last President. When she was first elected, she joked in an interview that the only bad part about it was that she couldn't get carried away when she attended the All-Ireland finals.
And *laughs at Patil making a big deal about such a mild curse*
I expected Harry to be the surprise visitor. DEFINITELY wasn't expecting Teddy.Author's Response: Haha, that's awesome! I'm glad the surprise visitor was a surprise! I love Teddy, so I had to put him in here. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I think it is a risk telling John, Amanda and Matt. After all, who knows what kind of people they will turn out to be? Pettigrew seemed trust worthy at 11 too.Author's Response: It is a risk, but it's one they're willing to take. Peter seemed trustworthy right up until the end, and I think at some point you do have to just trust people. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
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