Was just rereading the story. lovely ending.

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This is a beautiful, beautiful chapter. You portray the characters in an exquisite way that makes me smile and my heart warm. I have more love for Luna, more than I ever had (: And plus, I believe in Nargles too (;

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Thank you for posting such a fantastic story! You have captured Luna beautifully and write such wonderful descriptive passages so effortlessly. I cannot possibly choose my favourite bit! The way Luna and Rolf interact came across so naturally and I loved the inclusion of all the great supporting characters! Fully deserving of its Dobby award, please keep up the great work as you are a very gifted writer! :-)

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Loved the story... You created magic with your words; a magic so beautiful and powerful that the characters you have envisioned have come to life living their story right in front of my eyes.. Kudos to your talent!!

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WOW :) :) :) :) :) :) :) just too amazing for any more words...

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Loved it! I really liked your way with writing. I think this story deserves ten Dobby's!!

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Once again, a beautiful chapter. Luna is been my favorite character and I've always thought she's been so under
Developed. Thank you so much for making her story! I'll keep reading.

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This is a beautiful piece of work. I love how you took existing information from the books into your story. The thestrals especially.

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I'm so glad I found this story. This was an excellent read. Well deserved Dobby.

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So bittersweet. The stages of how you wrote the chapter made it very thought-provoking.

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I almost feel as though I don't need to read the rest of the story. This would have been a beautiful one-shot, it almost made me cry. You've really captured Luna, and I'm excited to read the rest. Thank you for writing it :)

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its the best story ever! loved it !! i loved the first kiss scene! it was so romantic, u truly r a writer!

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THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! :-)
I LOVE IT! :-D

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...Gustav. I don't know you yet...but i feel the need to shoo you away.
And I absolutely LOVE Luna. There aren't that many stories about her life...so I'm excited about this one. [:

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Brilliant chapter.I love the omniscient third person you used

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just the most gorgeous story, such a lovely read

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I cried so much it was so good, tho i think it deserved a longer ending with more descriptions in the more epilogue-ish part.

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I love this story! I'm sure that you've gotten that a million times before, but I just had to say it again. Such great character development!

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It seemed so in character for Luna to remark to herself about him not even saying goodnight when he left. I also liked that she got to make her room her own. I wonder how many apprentices Newt Scamander has had in the past, if he has a set thing he does for them.

I liked his grandson's change of opinion about his famous family. It rang so true. Great job.

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I really like this story. I thought I ought to tell you that. You might not often get that said so plainly. Luna is really coming into her own. And you're giving us readers a great impression of what goes on in her mind when she's not speaking. There's a lot of silence in a conversation with Luna and you fill it up so well.

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I really enjoyed that. Taking off her shoes to walk on the plain dirt was just like Luna. It was so bittersweet, just like a graduation ought to be. Especially one following a war like that.

I liked how you pointed out just how Luna has grown up over the years. And her trying to remember every detail as it was so that she could look back. Very good job.

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AW!! I LOVED IT! :D :D

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J'adore! Oui, oui!! LOL, no, but seriously, this story is very good. Apart from the few factual mishaps here and there it is entirely blemish free! I

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I was worried, that like other authors, you would create problems like having luna believe anything Mrs. Zabini said, I'm so glad you didn't :)
you're other chapters were great too!!

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Aww, I really liked that one, it was cute the way this one ended because it wasn't their first kiss, and the way she wanted to do 'accio' and he kissed her instead :)
I'm glad Rolf is finding out more about himself as he finds out about Luna. Being around her seems to make him think more about the important things about himself, instead of the frivolous.

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