AW that was so cute... and flufy and just feel goody in general. Im so happy you told me about it. I absolutely adored it.. although im not surprised! its wonderastic!
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Mads

Author's Response: thanks! i'm really glad you liked it! and i've never heard that word, wondertastic, i think i'm gonna start using it now! thanks for expanding my vocabulary! i think i might use it in an upcoming chapter in oblivion actually, i like it that much!, if its okay with you of course

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vera

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Good job Vera! I really enjoyed reading this one-shot and I thought it was very sweet! Thanks for reviewing my story so many times and I look forward to reading more of your work. Nice work!

Author's Response: thank you! i love your story so much! if you liked that one, try my other fan-fic, oblivion

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vera

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does it ever really say that his middle name is henry?
and james has hazel eyes?
is it in a muggle church? really...
i liked the proposal...
cute, sweet

Author's Response: no..i made up the henry part, and i was told [many times] that james' eyes are in fact hazel. [i had said that they were blue, and some people didn't like that.] and i think it's in a muggle church. i felt like if i wrote it as if it were a wizard wedding, that i would get a lot of things wrong, so if you want it to be in a muggle church and you can visualize it better that way, go for it! thanks for reading! check out my other fan fic, oblivion.

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vera

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Oh, this is soo sweet, its really cute well done chick Lotsa Love X

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad that you enjoyed it! if you liked this one, i suggest you check out my other fan fic, oblivion.

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vera

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Good job...it was really good. It could I felt like last longer maybe in a short fic with a couple of chapters...but all in all it was good.

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
if you liked that one, i suggest you read my other fan fic, oblivion. thanks for the review!!
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vera

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A very sweet wedding. Well written. Good characters. (Only thing: in canon James and Lily were married at 18 or 19 and both dead at 21)

Author's Response: yeah..i noticed that after i wrote it..
this was actually a project for school and then i changed it into a hpff..it was for to kill a mockingbird by harper lee. i suggest you read it, its really good
i'm glad you liked it! i should be getting more work out soon

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vera

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This is actually pretty good, but I'd like to make a suggestion. Perhaps you could get somebody to edit what you've written before posting it? There's a couple small mistakes:

Her name is Lily, not Lilly.

James has hazel eyes, not blue.

They couldn't have married eight years after they were eighteen. At this point they were already dead. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not.

But I'm just nitpicking. All in all, you did a great job. =)

Author's Response: thanks! i need to change that..you weren't the first person to tell me that..i didn't realize it would hit a nerve..and i never knew that james had hazel eyes..i probably forgot that part..
thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it! i should hopefully be getting out some more stuff soon, check out my other fan fiction, oblivion, tell me how you like it.

love,
vera

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