I don't know why you don't like it. The story's nice and I liked it. I like such mild stories and am going to add it to my favourites. Best of luck!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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I definitely do not hate it...I love it! It's soo adorable and sweet!
10/10
*love*

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I needed praise on this story. Thank you again.

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this story is prtty good. i like

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. If you want, read some of my other stories.

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kinda cute. It probably needs a little work and some emotion to the story but overall pretty nice 9/10

Author's Response: thank you. i'm thinking of totally starting over with this one. i'll most likely re-do it over the summer when i have time.

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Hi, I really loved it, you should be proud of it, I think you have really captured Ron and Hermione's love and tenderness for each other 10/10 Jem

Author's Response: Hey Jem,
thanks for reading. I'll chat with you soon.
Ash

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love it 10/10
-adahpfan :)

Author's Response: thank you. I have many other stories. Please feel free to read them.

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it's a good story.I t has a great plot, but there are some grammar errors in it. You are an excellent writer, just work on using discriptive lanuage, and bigger words. When you're writing, use different words instead of said or yelled. ex whispered, chuckled etc. keep it up, I haven't read any of your other work yet, but you could be a great writer.
ps. careful with ur spelling :)

Author's Response: thank you for the constructive criticism. I have always had trouble with grammar, descriptive language as well. Thank you for reading!!

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I actually love this story. It's very gentle and tender.
Well written too. Congratulations.

Author's Response: Thank you. Btw, love your pen name. anyway, i'm thinking of writing one for Harry and Ginny.

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aw this was cute. i loved the idea

Author's Response: thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking of writing one for Harry and Ginny.

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this is really cute i liked it.
good job :]
kaTia

Author's Response: thank you. I'm not proud of it, but if you liked it, i'm not going to complain. Hope you read some of my other stories :).

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Dear Author
I thought it was a good story something diffrent and generates more feeling. Question why dont you like the story. I thought it was really good

Author's Response: It's not that I didn't like it, i wasn't proud of it. I really need to work on it, maybe develop it a little more. Glad you liked it though, thanks for reading.

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I really like the begining but the middle could maybe need some work and same with the letter. I don't know but thats about it, other wise it is really good.

Author's Response: I realized from the moment I finished it, that it needed work. Like I said in my A/N, I'm not very proud of it. anyway, thanks for reading.

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