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Review #1, by Claire All it takes is 20 minutes.

11th May 2008:
I love it so much! Update soon. Kylie reminds me of myself a bit. Just to tell you, if you didn't make the chapter image you need to credit them and it seems like they deleted it off their photobucket so I would PM them to ask them to re-host and give you the code.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I thought I credited :S Is it there now? Anyways, thanks again!

~.~Jess~.~


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Review #2, by huckleberry_pie All it takes is 20 minutes.

30th April 2008:
wow, really great beginning. it's an interesting take on the marauder era, and very well written. only a few point to make "There really was nothing special about me. I was tall, thin, with long blonde hair that reached my lower back and eyes as blue as an ocean." that description sounds a bit like a third person narration would, because i dont think anyone would refer to their own eyes as being blue as an ocean. maybe if she said, "eyes that my mom always used to say were as blue as the ocean" or somethingg.

your story reminds me SO much of the tv show one tree hill. like this, reminds me of lucas's commentary from the first episode of the fourth season:
"It may be a lot like your world, maybe it’s nothing like it. But if you look close enough, you may see someone here just like you. " and how Kylie's mom died and she uses a webcam, that reminds me of peyton. but i don't know if you've ever seen the show, so you might not know what i'm talking about.

all in all, great story! i hope to read more soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Also, thanks for telling me about the description thing, your right. I'll change it! Lol, I never actually watched the show one tree hill but my sister does. I'll have to check that out ;) Thanks again.

~`~ Jess~`~


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