Oh, how sweet. The details are great; you included the rule of getting into the Room of Requirement, and you remembered that Ginny's got a flowery scent. Well done!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Excellent story. Please do continue. I loved every bit of it.Author's Response: Thank you:) Im hoping to get some more writtne wjile im in mexico;) Report Review
It was a good chapter. I really like it.
The Best line - in my opinion - was:
"Well, for one, it's called having a heart. And, I love you, too." She moved over in front of him and brought her face close to his, the brown eyes gazing into the green.
*smiles* Yeah the having a heart part is so like Ginny in my opinion.
Keep up the good work.
~ BonnieWritterAuthor's Response: Thank you:) Thats my favorite part too:D
I think I actually wrote that in Math? Or French.. Report Review
wb. a good beginning to a story about life afterwards. using the room of requirement was a nice touch, since her showing up was what he really needed rather than what he actually asked for. nicely done.Author's Response: Thank you so much ;) It really is one of my favorite things I've written. This is actually the second draft. I hated the first one so much I deleted it and started ove :P Report Review
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