Love this story ;) IDK if you're going to update anytime soon but i can't wait! Report Review
this is so good!
you cant just leave it there!
it is amazing
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Great story.. i just read the first two chapters and there very well written. i can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm afraid it could be a very long time before the next one, if ever. Report Review
Chelsea! Oh my God, this was spectacular. I mean, really. Absolutely completely utterly gorgeous. *fangirls* I was very excited when you signed up because I know you are the Queen of Tragedy and with Ember you showed a lot of wit and insight and amazing characterization. This is Your Heart on Vengeance is no different, but yet it is.
It is very distinctly your writing, because it is a very lucid, almost brusque pacing that fits perfectly here. At the same time, this has a different plot than a lot of your work, because there is a lot going on here. And let me say, I am SO glad you're taking the domestic conflict, too. Their interaction as a family is wonderful, especially between Fleur and Bill. And Victoire and Dom! OMG, they are absolutely adorable! *hugs children*
After the restaurant scene, with the curse-breaking - very good touch. And ZOMG the fight between Fleur and Bill! While you've established they aren't perfectly happy, the fight is just... :O It's unexpected, but it's not, since you've written them all in this way so it makes perfect sense. Not OOC at all, of course, but it still shows how passionate Bill is about this Greyback business and... *sigh dreamily* Amazing. You've got me nervous and fangirl-ing and excited and... *squee*
Awesome, awesome, AWESOME job, Chelsea. I'm so ecstatic this is up, you're doing splendidly and I can't wait for more and this is... *loves* Ten and favorites. OBVIOUSLY. I mean, this is LOVE! *loves* *shuts up*Author's Response: I don\\\'t even know what to say besides thank you! Your reviews are always fantastic, especially when you point out obscure little details. LOVE YOU GUBBY! Report Review
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