I really enjoyed reading this! Beautiful description, and you really made the charaters speak as they would in the real books. Most people just give them new personalitites but you kept the same ones quite well. lovely Report Review
I really, really, really like this story so far. The characters are written amazingly well! I like the way these first two chapters have just moved along naturally. I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much :) I was going to stop writing since the feedback was kind of low, but now I'll keep going! I'll get to writing :D Report Review
Really well done. Great use of desrciptive words and adjectives. You grabbed my attention with the way you constructed the story and based it on the love between Ron and Hermione and Harry and Ginny Report Review
ooo a cliffy! evil! haha loved this story, hope you can update soon (: Report Review
so so goood. hurry up and write 100 more chapters. :D Report Review
I really like the dialogue exchanged between characters. It's really effortless. The banner is AMAZING by the way!! Report Review
eppp i luv it - and pgmy puffs are cute - and i cor wait till the next chappie - it cud be a bit longer though p.s.the piccy from the banner is from hbp - yay hbp Report Review
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