it is a good plot so far but it seems to jump around a little to much, which makes it hard to follow. other then that you are doing a good job, keep it up!Author's Response: Actually, I meant it to be like that. But if it's getting too much I'll try make it jump less. Thanks. :) Report Review
I already tried to send a review but had a technical hitch. Basically imploring you to keep up your story which I find enthralling, as I am sure your other readers do. As I am a picky reader, please be assured of my sincerity. Looking forward to what comes next.Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) Report Review
FIRST OF ALL, FORGET THE WEASLEYS FOR ABANDONING HERMIONE. THIS SHOULD GET INTRESTINGAuthor's Response: It will. Just keep reviewing and let me know how you like it. Thank you. Report Review
Very good, bit of a shaky start; but it's still good. xo heidi Report Review
keep it up i like it so far :D Report Review
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