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Review #1, by Nikki Not Again!: Chapter 1

1st May 2008:
Hey nice job, really drew me in and would love to hear more. When is the next chapter up?

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Review #2, by nonentity Not Again!: Chapter 1

28th March 2008:
*raises eyebrows at Scorpius changing story midstream*
I like Frankie.

"Trust me, you don't."-->>"Trust me, you don't want to."
"I will not be a dishonorable and unworthy student by lying to one of my professor's with one of the highest prestige at Hogwarts."-->> professors (no apostrophe), and prestigious might sound less awkward. It's also unclear if the prestige referred to Hogwarts or the professor.

The personalities are a bit too close to the original trio and Draco and crew. You may want to use different characterization details, although you don't have to specify how they differ from their parents.

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