love this story! are you planning on finishing it :) ? Report Review
It's really good, I hope you keep going with it. Report Review
Okay first off:
review for your first story - AWESOME! it was really good, and I think you did well to capture the Jackie's emotions, which can't have been easy! and I liked how you really persuaded us that Sirius and Jackie were working really well, while you subtely pointed out that she also really like Remus!
so, onto the sequel:
the first two chapters are great already! I knew Sirius wouldn't be able to not go out with anybody else while Jackie was in rehab! And Remus seems to be being nice enough to her, so maybe things will turn out well...or maybe not! Can't wait for more :D Report Review
I love the first story,please continue. Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!! Sorry to sound really demanding :) but i love this story line and want to find out who shouted her name.
See i have a feeling it may be Sirius as their favourite spot (Their being Sirius and Jackie's) was the tree near the lake, and because he has seen Remus and Jackie there he feels a little hurt by Remus and Jackie.
lol i to involved in stories lol sorry.
Anyway Great story so far and i just want to say well done for the first story and this sequal you are writing. :) x Report Review
Jebus you have to update ASAP. awesome story. loves it Report Review
next chapter please!!! (: Report Review
I love these stories; please write some more! the Cliffy is driving me INSANE =D Report Review
YOU HAVE TO FINISH! its a great story, please, please, please finish! Report Review
Pff I can't believe she didn't just choose for Remus earlier!
He's so sweet :)
Please go on with the story? I really like it!:) Report Review
WHO SCREAMED HER NAME??!!!
WAS IT SIRIUS??!!!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
GREAT STORY BY THE WAY...read the first one a couple of days ago FREAKIN AWSOME!!!Author's Response: :P Lol, who knows ;)
I'm sorry I've been MIA for like a year, but yea, maybe I'll try and finish it off after exams... :)
And thank you! *gives you cookie* for reading my story :] and liking it, lol.
x Report Review
this so really really good please write more son!Author's Response: Thank you :] I'll try, when I have time again. It's been a busy year... Report Review
hey..i love the thing that u didn't put jayjay and sirius together ..at least not yet..:P keep updating..i really like your story and i wanna know what's gonna be next..xxxAuthor's Response: :P thanks, but who knows what'll happen in the future ;)
~Mal xoxx Report Review
=O Sirius! How could you?! Ohwell. Remus and Jackie can get together now < 3
I really like this fic. I read the one before this as well just now, and that was uber cool too, but I didn't review on that, sorry
But that and this are great! =D 10/10Author's Response: Haha! Yes, well I'm glad you see the positive side of it ;) and I'm so glad to hear you like it! thank you! :D makes me happy to hear. Makes me want to skip school, go home and write more, then post... :P Report Review
I really like this story, and I hope you plan on continuing it!Author's Response: I do, when I get around to it... :) thanks! *cookie* Report Review
gah!!! update soon lol!Author's Response: aaah, I'll try! XD Lol. Thanx! Report Review
Oh my gosh, I so expected it. And now I NEED the next chapter! Update soon 10/10!Author's Response: Hehe, I guess it was a bit predictable... :P
thanx! Report Review
AHHH! What did you do? *cries* stupid Sirius. Uber excited that the beggining of the sequel has come. Uber not excited that Siri and JayJay are most likely no more. Huh. Oh well, brilliant!Author's Response: Well... I guess "it isn't what it looks like" is a bit out-dated huh... ;)
awww, I'm so glad to hear you're so excited about the sequel... sorry I had to do that to Sirius. Poor boy, he begged me not to... XD well, thanx for the lovely review! Report Review
poor Jackie oh well this is going to make the story more intresting.
ok please please please update i really Relly really want to know what happen Please Please Pleaseee!
Update Really Really soon!:)Author's Response: Yeah, you know I need a new plot this time :P I'll see what I can do, sometime this week though.
thanx for reviewing! *cookie* Report Review
I love this story (so far) and your last story! They are totally AWESOME! Now I'm just waiting for to update again soon!!Love it! UPDATE!Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you love it :D thank you! Report Review
Like your story can't wait for the next chapter. Not very shocking Sirius being with another girl but still so mean of him.If i were her i would never talk to him again.Anyways love your story.Author's Response: Heheh, well he did have to wait for her for a year... we'll see what she does though ;) thanx for an awesome review. *cookie* Report Review
i am so happy she is better=D
sirius is a jerk tho.
great story I loved the first one!Author's Response: :) Me too! Aww... poor Siri... he's just... confused... lol, nah. you'll see... I'm glad you like my stories :) Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
please update soon !!! 10/10 :) !Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Happy to see the story back.Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy :) your happiness is my inspiration :) thanx! Report Review
Wow. I kind of guessed it might be something like that, but didn't think it really would be, if that makes any sense. Who's the girl? Please update soon!! 10/10~Ms. CarlyAuthor's Response: It makes total sense :) I'm like that about things too! And the girl... well she's just a random character I made up =^_^= hehe. But you might see more of her later... who knows?
Thanks for taking the time to review! :) *hands you cookie* :)
~Mal~ Report Review
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