That was amazing.
I loved the way you portrayed James, Albus and Lily and I absolutely adored the way you had Dudley having a magical daughter.
It was incredible! Definitely adding to my favourites! Report Review
amazing. i wish that there was more, that it wasn't just a one shot. it was wonderful Report Review
Awesome story, as always! Write on! Report Review
this was beatuifuly thought out ! Report Review
Your writing style is very refreshing. =] Report Review
This was a really interesting story. I normally don't read one-shots, but I found this one to be very engaging. You had a lot of info in a very short period of time. That's too sad that Dudley views his daughter as some type of curse. I'd be interested to know how her first year goes at Hogwarts. Well done! Report Review
This is just great!
I saw the link on a forum thread, and am certainly glad I read it.
You have done a masterful job with Albus and James in this chapter! I laughed all the way through it. (I've helped raise 5 boys, so I KNOW!)
I can just imagine Harry and Draco trying to discuss sleepovers between their boys. I certainly hope there's more to come! Instantly one of my favorites here! Report Review
there should definently be more to this story perhap a sequel Report Review
Great story! Really good plot, i loved reading it.
Well Done! Report Review
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