aww, this is so sweet, I loveit!
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I love Luna stories... there's so much more to her character then we are shown in the books. I think she goes a lot deeper then she is unsualy portrayed and you did a nice job showing that side of her here.
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I loved this story...
You captured the soul of Luna... her sincerity, her honesty, and her innocence...
More than that, however, you conveyed a message important in everyone's life. We all need friends... connection is an essential thing... I don't know if you are religious, but this seems to hold true even if you're not.
I believe that we are not bodies that have souls... instead, we are souls who have bodies... it is in a connection between two souls that "god" is present... and that is good.
Whether you intended for this message to be conveyed or not, it is. you presented the message of the importance of connection in a easy and non obtrussive form.. and that is wonderful...Author's Response: Wow! I just wrote this one day when I was feeling particularly lonely. I'm not really religious, but I agree whole heartedly with you on the point that we are souls with bodies.
Thanks for this wonderful review! Report Review
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