haha i loved the last line!! i love all your stories!!
10/10Author's Response: =D
-Holly Report Review
It's cute. I normally read longer stories, but I like this one.
Awesome job! And I like the 'fifty galleons' comment.Author's Response: Thanks, It means alot that people reveiw :) Report Review
Cute, I liked the bit, "You owe me fifty galleons Wormtail."
This is full of small errors though, maybe you should go over it.Author's Response: Yeah, I am looking for a beta reader but no luck as of yet. Funily enough this story was written in History and now I'm replying to you in History :) Thank you for your reveiw. Report Review
not bad, not bad at all! you should extend it, make a story out of it, because it would be better!Author's Response: Thank you, I might I'm not quite sure yet. Funily enough this story was written in History and now I'm replying to you in History :) Report Review
This is great! I loved it. Sirius making vomiting noises, and Remus a lost goldfish. Priceless.
Very well written, and really enjoyable. Keep writingAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I like thAT bit too. Funily enough this story was written in History and now I'm replying to you in History :) Report Review
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