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Review #1, by Nat Here in my Arms

25th April 2008:
I generally read much longer stories, but I liked this one. The concept itself was relatively original and I liked your OC. I think that more proof-reading may be advisable but I know thats easier said than done at 1am. Grammar doesn't bother me so much but I got the impression that words were missing and having to pause to figure out what the word was damaged the flow a bit. Overall though, really good story and I hope you are planning to write more, if you haven't already. for a first fanfic - wow.

Author's Response: Thanks. I feel special now. =] Just kidding.
I agree with the proof-reading, but I'm not up to it now or even then. I'm sorry that you thought some words were missing or anything such as that, I could have waited to post it, but I was just amazingly excited with getting something done for one thing.
I'm still unsure whether I am going to continue writing or not. I'm really busy, but it has crossed my mind on more than one occasion...

Thank you!


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Review #2, by horsenut8 Here in my Arms

22nd March 2008:
I LOVED IT! have you written any other fics? 'cause I would want to read them!
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's my first one and for the moment my only one. I was really bored one night and decided to write something and it came to me. Hence all the grammer mistakes because I was lazy and tired...

Thank you!


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Review #3, by Smith_Babe_1 Here in my Arms

22nd March 2008:
Awww that was so sweet i loved it so much to make it one of my favourites lol
Hope to read mor of your work as time goes by!!
Hugs

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to make it a bit sweet and everything. It's almost like a Lily/James but with a different background as my friends have told me. Thanks for making it one of your favorites, that means a lot because it was my first one.

Thank you!


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