ha in your face it must reallly suck for her but its a little sad

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awaw. i feel so sorry for Petunia! Nice story. Maybe a little gushy at the kissing parts. But other than that, good job
Great Job
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Oh this story describes Petunia perfectly, after reading this you kind of feel sorry for her. Although I truly a milion trulys loved James here. 10/10

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ohh i actually feel sorry for petunia for once, this is a strange feeling. but i loved your story!!

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wow thats powerful, makes me feel soo sad, because when you think about it, Lily did have everthing. However Petunia could of too, it was all up to her. She simply made the wrong choise and lived her life in anger and jelousy.

MEL

Author's Response: thx for such a great review! i luv how you understood the whole point of the sotry. read my other stories too thx again ~kat

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umm what's the point of this story?

Author's Response: the point was that petunia was jealous of lily because she was perfect while petunia was not. thx for reviewing even thought you did get the point

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Aww, I feel so sorry for Petunia here! My heart broke for her at the end. But at the same time, the moments between Lily and James were so wonderful and precious. I would be jealous if my sister had a boy like that and I had a boy like Vernon, so Petunia's jealousy is completely understandable. Really well done. 10/10 =)

Author's Response: thx for the great review. keep reading and reviewing

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cool. i liked the presents. one thing how did james rearange the stares were they fake great idea though!

Author's Response: james rearranged them for a while with his wand and then he would put them back. thx for reading and reivewing


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aw this is very very cute

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i REALLY REALLY REALLY liked this story!

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I think your description of Petunia's jelousy was excellent, and while I think for the most part, the jumpiness might have suit the story (which started off fine, being descriptive, as a sister might just jump between offences) between events being described, it needed a tiny bit more transistion.
Other than that, very well done :D

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wow what a AMAZING story! You captured the envy of Petunia perfectly. I adore this story :) Excellent work.

Author's Response: thx for reading and reviewing and plz read my other marauder story. this one is based on the marauders

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omg that was so sad :'[
it was really well written and it was most definetly how Petunia probably felt. amazing. keep it up!

Author's Response: thx for reviewing and plz read my other story thx again

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An interesting fic you got here. It would explain why Petunia would have been so mean to Harry.

Nicely written

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Awww.James and Lily are so cute! I feel really bad for Petunia though. Great Job!

Author's Response: thanks a lot. please read my other marauder story

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