Aww, so cute! Love it! :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
I have been meaning to read this one, and it's really good! I liked Bill sentence: "Can we keep both of them?" I thought it was really cute!
Very good job!
LizzieAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. This is probably my least favorite story I've written, so I tend to feel mildly embarrassed when I see I got a review on it. lol Report Review
Aw, I loved Bill's line at the end there! That was adorable. ;) Actually, this whole fic ws rather cute. I thought you did a really great job at characterizing Bill and Charlie, the way they kept fighting. Percy was cute, too.
I really liked Molly's line about the X chromosone. I thought that was funny. Great story, going into my favourites! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. It's a fluffy little thing, so I'm always happy when the cute can make someone smile. Report Review
Funny story. Can we keep both of them? Haha..Author's Response: :) Thanks! Report Review
In all absoluteness I adore this fan fic Great Job!!!Author's Response: Thanks! This one is actually my least favorite of all the fanfics I've written, so I always appreciate when someone likes it. :) Report Review
Can we keep both of them, Mummy?
Excellent one-shot. Sad and funny all at once.Author's Response: Thanks! I actually think this is my worst posted piece. I always appreciate kind words on it. :) Report Review
I'm sitting here laughing fit to be tied, which is a good thing considering moments ago you had me bawling. This fic has some of the best lines ever, from saying that the babies are already kicking each other, to Bill asking to keep them both. What a wonderful story! After this evening spent reading your stories, I have to tell you that you are wonderful writer. You write as someone who has experience in life, and raising kids, as well as someone with a great talent for painting images with words. Thank you so much for sharing and making my evening so much fun. I hope you keep writing.Author's Response: Wow I'm glad you liked this one! I think it's not one of my better efforts, but I liked it. I do like writing Molly as a mom, since that's my life right now :) Thank you for all the reviews, and I hope you keep reading the rest of my stories! Report Review
cute chapter. u ccould do one but when Molly finds out she's pregnant with Ginny. keep up the good work.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you! I have one where she's pregnant with Ginny, but haven't written her finding out. Good idea, though. Thanks for the review! Report Review
"Can we keep both of them?" LOL. Too funny. It was a nice reminder for Molly and I think that she would have been pleased to hear she was having twins. Very pleased. :)
I LOVE the boys' antics. It seems as if you have a lot of experience with that because you write it so well.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
I just had to read this fic, seeing as though I am pregnant myself. In fact I have just got back from a visit to the obstetrician lol.
I really loved this one-shot, it reminded me so much of taking my own son to the doctor's with me, so you really characterised the three boys quite well, I couldn't imagine trying to take three of my son to the doctor's with me, I felt so sorry for poor Molly!
My favourite line would have to be Bill's question at the end, "Can we keep both of them, Mummy?" Healer Whitlock wasn't the only one laughing, it was just so cute and the typical innocent question that a child would ask.
On the technical side I couldn't fault you at all on your spelling and grammar. And it really was such an endearing piece that I can relate too so well at the moment that I just can't help giving it a 10/10.Author's Response: It's funny, I wasn't sure that line was going to come out right, but it seems to have worked. I worry sometimes that things sound better in my head than they really do ;)
I reacted quite like Molly to finding out I was having twins - I was sure my OB was just joking with me, but then he put them up on screen with their little heads together (then one of them flipped and they started kicking each other in the head - I should have known what I was in for). It's really bizarre to think of having two babies in there, and so uncomfortable at the end. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Absolutely loved it. Always felt there should've been more Molly in the series. Thanks !Author's Response: Hey gorgeous! Yay I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
I love that espacially "Can we keep both of them, Mummy?" that is soo cute
*hugs*Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
I get it now!
I just had a little stroke of genious and the little lightbulb went on
bahahaha gotta love Bill!
"Can we keep both of them, Mummy?"
He's so cute!
-KatAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yeah I think she must've chosen the name initials for her twins as an homage to her brothers, who had only just died - although we don't know whether Gideon & Fabian were twins, there's no canon source for that. I just like to think they were :) Report Review
Bravo! Another great story!
"Can we keep both of them, Mummy?"
Something only a 5 year old would ask.
I love reading you stories they are always
funny and beliveable!Author's Response: *lol* Thank you so much! Report Review
I found out I was pregnant with my first the same week my best friend found out she was having twins. I remember praying, please, Lord, let there only be one in me, lol. She had identical boys, and I adore them, but they can be a handful. The healer is right, though, if anybody can handle 5 boys (and then 6, plus her girl finally) it's Molly! And I know Gideon and Fabian being twins isn't canon, but I like that you have them that way, especially since they have the same initials as Fred & George. Well done again!Author's Response: Heh... I was so stunned when I found out it was twins. I'd had an ultrasound at 8 weeks and they only saw one baby, one heartbeat, and then at 18 weeks I went in to find out the sex and the doctor said "oh there's two heartbeats" - I thought he was joking so I said "yeah you're funny". I thought my husband was going to fall on the floor. Ha. Yeah, good times. Identical boys are fun though. Thanks for the review babe! Report Review
its so adorable!! I love all your stories there so cute!!!
Can we keep both of them, Mummy
bills so cute! please keep writing these brilliant one shots!!Author's Response: lol.... Thank you! I'm glad you like my stories. Report Review
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