Reading Reviews for Unbreakable
  
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Review #1, by SongBird09 Unbreakable

18th May 2008:
such a sweet story...i like it very much!

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks, so much! I'm glad you liked it!!!

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Review #2, by Manxman1831 Unbreakable

25th March 2008:
Very nicely done. Captures the mood beautifully.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :D

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Review #3, by a potter po Unbreakable

24th March 2008:
Hi! I thought I'd review your story and I'm glad I did. It's a nice little one shot, and the way you write Harry and Ginny is very in character, well done.
I did however feel that the initial conversation between Harry and Ginny seems a bit contrived. Maybe because it launches into some very deep conversation without proper building up, like Harry wouldn't really volunteer such information without a lot of encouragement from Ginny.

I like how the story ends with a snow fight, an adorable light moment.

Author's Response: Okay, thanks! I'll have to go back and look at that. Glad you liked it anyhow! Thanks again!


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Review #4, by starry_night89 Unbreakable

24th March 2008:
Cute :)

The characters were well written, not one seemed OOC. The whole piece was just a pleasure to read. It was like a blissful moment picked out from a novel, I suppose. I like one-shots like this, without an overdose of emotional conflict. Mind you, I like those too but it's just been a while since I read something as light as this. It was refreshing, almost. I want to know how Ron proposed to Hermione though I'm not much a Ron fan so I'm glad you didn't include that part ;)

The sentiment with the ring being Lily's worked so well with this story.

Overall, a pleasant read. happy-endings are nice, forget how those were. hehe.

10/10 :D

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks sooo much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You know, with reviews like this...I wonder why my stories don't do better in the duels...This one only got six votes, but I also don't read the other stories so I don't know. Thanks again!

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Review #5, by ginnyXharry Unbreakable

20th March 2008:
I loved it!!! 100/10 ^_^

Author's Response: AW! Thanks!

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Review #6, by gwen marie Unbreakable

19th March 2008:
aw...that was adorable,
very good job!

gwen

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! You're my first review! Yay!

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