I'm sorry but people at Hogwarts do not 'graduate' they leave. Its good but i just wish everyone would stop trying to make everything in Harry potter more Americanised. Please just remember they are British!

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I liked the idea of the song. It all turned out really nice, so well done!

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good story with a sweet ending. can't wait to read more of your work.

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The story's content it pretty good. I find it believable and enjoyable to read. However, the writing itself, craft-wise, has finally got me enough, that I cracked by the eleventh chapter and had to write a review. The grammar is all over the place, with verb tenses not agreeing with each other. Also, there are a few factual errors in the story. First of all, Errol shouldn't have been the owl to go into the dormitory to wake up ron, because by then, he had his own owl, Pig. Secondly, Ron shouldn't have been able to go into Hermione's dormitory because, as previously observed in the books, boys can't go up the girl's staircase to their dorms, because the stairwell turns into a slide, preventing the boys from the climbing the staircase. Besides the grammatical errors, and these two [ so far] errors that i've seen.The story is pretty entertaining, so I'll give you that. =]

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i like it, really cute :)!

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That was amazing. I think it was the best kiss I've read on any fansite. It was emotional and yet totally believable. I loved it. :)

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AW. loved the ending!
great story!
congrarts+job well done!

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i love ron weasley.

“Can’t talk Harry! I’m going to be with the girl I’m in love with!”

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awww. poor lav. but she is right, ron+hermonie!!! :)

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YES RON. YOU DO LOVE HER *
*HERMONIE!!

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yayayy for the kiss! come on ron. forget lavender-smavender!

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dun.dun.dun. wow. that was a jerk move! poor hermoniee :(

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lovvee the akward-ocity :) lol

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i love their dreamss. hopefully they will come true soon :)

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"Heh .. yeah .. you and me. That's ... aherm ... funny ... What a thought!" Hermione said slowly then rather rapidly. Ron started fidgeting with his cloak. He gave a small shy chuckle too.

"Heh heh .." He nervously laughed, "Well .. er .. it's getting late. I'll head to bed!"
LOVE IT

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good for hermonie saying the 3 big words :) but rons def the one for her. heeheehe

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ughh, im not a lavender fan. lol but she isnt ttthhhat bad in this story :) love it

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love this story already:)

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Oh!!! That was so romantic it made my heart sing :)

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i love the way youve characterised harry in this chapter he's really funny

*hugs*

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wow that was amazing. i loved that the crowd parted when hermione walked toward the middel of the floor and that ron was there with a rose. you know i can just picture that scene.that was romantic.a great way to end the story.
well done

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that was amazing. soo cute. i love that the crowd parted when hermione walked towards them and ron was in the middle of the crowd with a rose. that was so romantic. a great way to end the story. well done

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Write a new story NOW

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I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

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THAT WAS FANTASTIC ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ!

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