{reviewid: 2623939, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan98'}
3rd December 2011:
i loved all of the chapters you made! can you make more please? the ones that are completed so far are great!
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{reviewid: 2623913, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan98'}
3rd December 2011:
your really good at writing love story's with Sirius and Serena! i wish i was talented as you!
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{reviewid: 2623908, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan98'}
3rd December 2011:
i really love your chapters. i know i have only read 2 so far but i think you should keep writing about sirius and serena. you are a wonderful writer. keep up the good work mate!
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{reviewid: 2623900, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan98'}
3rd December 2011:
i really liked the chapter!
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{reviewid: 2552360, reviewer: 'NymphadoraLupin'}
23rd July 2011:
I love this story! You are a very talented writer!! Update soon please :)
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{reviewid: 2505781, reviewer: 'panchami'}
10th April 2011:
hey its amazing i realy love serens and xeno
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{reviewid: 2142451, reviewer: 'emmettcullenswife'}
15th June 2009:
oh my godness!
loved it!!!
i just think that,knowing Sirius,there might be some annoying bitch trying to...steal him away from Serena.
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{reviewid: 2073927, reviewer: 'miss%20regulus%20black'}
13th March 2009:
funny ending
and good luck on the editing
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{reviewid: 2003514, reviewer: 'by%20name%20not%20nature'}
6th December 2008:
I absolutely love it! i cant wait to read more. please please please update super soon!
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{reviewid: 1964528, reviewer: 'vianey'}
15th October 2008:
i love it i love it i love it!
awww its so sweet i love the characters and the way you portray them
the confrontations are well written
and all the witty lines are perfect!!
gosh ive liked EVERY chapter so far!
and i love they xeno and marribelle relationship
its so fun and sweet
god sirius is soo hot!
**shudders**
please write more asap!
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{reviewid: 1946801, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
9th June 2008:
WOW!
I didn't expect that.
I really can't wait to read what happens next.
50/10
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{reviewid: 1943288, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
5th June 2008:
i hope we see more of xeno, he is comic relief itself! more good characterisation in this chapter. i also like that serena is quite shy, but is clearly comfortable around sirius. more of their interaction to come, i hope. and more alice, her nosiness knows no bounds!!
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{reviewid: 1943275, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
5th June 2008:
i like the way you are building up sirius & serena's feelings for each other. and your introduction of xeno lovegood was hilarious. very true to character, i would imagine!
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{reviewid: 1941358, reviewer: 'heyITSme'}
3rd June 2008:
lol. good story...and alice is a...B! lol
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{reviewid: 1940581, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
Absolutly fabulous!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
50/10
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{reviewid: 1940529, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
I am absolutly mad for this story.
It is incredible.
30/10
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{reviewid: 1940515, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
I absolutly love this story.
It is really fabulous.
20/10
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{reviewid: 1939981, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
Absolutly wonderful.
I really love it.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1939958, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
WOW!
This story is very good.
I can't wait to see how everything
plays out.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1939950, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
2nd June 2008:
Fabulous story.
I simply must read more.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1906360, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
26th April 2008:
good descriptive chapter. you have really given the characters depth. sirius & serena are quite sweet together!
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{reviewid: 1906353, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
26th April 2008:
that was funny, she really has left her common sense on the floor!!
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{reviewid: 1906347, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
26th April 2008:
the marauders have been written really well. i'll bet that regulus will be raging if serena & sirius get together!
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{reviewid: 1906340, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
26th April 2008:
interesting start. poor serena, i can only imagine the vile things regulus has said about her.
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{reviewid: 1904731, reviewer: 'Dallas'}
24th April 2008:
Really like it. Put together well, nothing akward; good job! expecting more . . .
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