{reviewid: 165594, reviewer: '%3F%3F'}
5th June 2004:
that was a great story!!
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{reviewid: 103754, reviewer: 'Rynn'}
9th February 2004:
This one was a bit better. Make sure to double check your work and please, put it into book format. When someone speaks, but it into a new paragraph. Look in the Harry Potter books and other people's fan fics. That might help you improve your work. Till we speak again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice i will keep that in mind in my next fanfic
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{reviewid: 103752, reviewer: 'Rynn'}
9th February 2004:
Hey
Your chapters are too short. Lengthen them. It is an okay story I suppose, but don/'t put things in like kids don't mind me teaching even though I'm famous. But keep trying!!!
Good job so far.
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{reviewid: 102133, reviewer: 'elmo'}
4th February 2004:
gr8!
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{reviewid: 102132, reviewer: 'elmo'}
4th February 2004:
well i think its a brilliant story but just skip a line everytime sum 1 talks it gets confusing! gr8 story line tho im sure it twill b a gr8 story keep it up! : )
Author's Response: Thanks!! I will keep that in mind when i start my next fanfic!!
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{reviewid: 101895, reviewer: 'Kathleen%20Potter'}
3rd February 2004:
I love it!! please continue !!
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{reviewid: 101893, reviewer: 'Kathleen%20Potter'}
3rd February 2004:
I love it!! please continue !!
Author's Response: Thank you Kathleen Potter!! i probably wont get a chance to post another chapter today but maybe tomorrow! Ive already started another starring Draco and he falls for Hermione! but its different so keep checking!
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{reviewid: 101822, reviewer: 'babygirl'}
3rd February 2004:
that was sooo good please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much babygirl! The encouragement really helps, Ive writted Daria fafics before but never Harry Potter and I never put any online I just let my friends read them!
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{reviewid: 101788, reviewer: 'Lynn'}
3rd February 2004:
I think your story is okay although you need to work on your grammar and read the story before submitting it. KEEP WRITING need more chapters!
Author's Response: okay so i admit i sent myself this one! i thought of something i did wrong and decided to send it to myself to help me remember to correct it next time lol im a dork you'll have to excuse me
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