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Ahh! I really love his so far, it is so sweet, and the people seem almost to kind to be true, I hope that if something like this were to happen to myself, or anyone that I knew, that there would be people willing to do everything they could to help out! I cant wait to read more, keep up the good work :)

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this story is such an original idea and i can't wait to see where it goes!

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this is a rly interesting story, and i'm interested 2 c what happens next! pleaz update soon! also, i luv ur story back to black. update that soon 2! pleaz!

Author's Response: wow.. thanks... i have really fallen behind on my stories, but i graduate this year so ive had a hell of alot of work to do, but come summer ill do my best to update. thanks for the review :)
Mads

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:) it was good
really good
10/10

Author's Response: i honestly was not expecting this reaction to this story. i guess i'll definately have to continue it once schools over :) thanks for the review

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i absolutly love it and dont just stop updating because some people dont bother to read it or not review it and do you really think published authors stop writing because occasionally some people dont like their work and come on if that was true then from what i hear at school the harry potter series would have been abandonned a long time ago

Author's Response: its not that. well its partly that. the thing is im rather stuck for that story... and I'm completely focused on Stages of Bloom for now. But I'll probably pick this one back up again once I'm done so keep your eyes open :) thanks for the review, its much appreciated!
xx Mads

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That was awesome! the story line was pretty original and i cant wait till the interaction with the maurauders starts.. thatl be so cute! :P

oh just one question..is the rapist and Rebecca's father someone we know or just random?

x

Author's Response: Wow. lol I cant beleive you read this one too. Its just a random storyline. I was tired when i started it and its on hiatus but i'll work on it once i have more ideas. lol but i just updated Stages of Bloom, so yeah :) check that one out again in the meen time! :)
Maddie

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That. Was. Good.

Really. Good.

XOXO

Author's Response: Thanks! It means alot that you like it! Chapter 7 is in validation so... it'll be ready soon!

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I think this is a really great idea! I absolutely love it! The writing is brilliant and the idea is amazing. But the problem I see is that Rebecca is only either 2 or 3 so you kind of can't teach her math or spelling then. But other then that it's perfect! 10/10 Update asap.

Author's Response: ok u make an excellent point... by math i mean how to count (wich i was doing by 3) and how to a,b,c,d, etc.. and spell easy words like MOM, CAT, etc.. (wich again i was doing by three) plus shes a magic kid.. so shes super genius> lol is that a good enough solution?
mads:)

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I really like it so far! It's lovely and a great introduction to the story. So sad, though!
One thing I'd like to know, is where are Amber's parents? Is she an orphan? Have they disowned her because of her rape? Is Amber just too proud and independent to take her parents charity, so she has moved away from home?
Anyway, LOVE IT!
xxx

Author's Response: i could tell you... muahahaha, but. its a secret, to be revealed latter on

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OMG! Plez UPDATE! it is AWSOME!

Author's Response: Thanks but the story is kindof on hold until i find time to write. Sorry im just applying to schools and its difficult!

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I really like it! it's fresh and new and original and just plain great!

Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'm going to try and update after my exams.. everything is soo hectic now.. but the minute school is done i'll be back.. and hopefully better than ever! :P
mads

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i really liked it! the only thing that i wasn't really sure that i liked was that amber could bring rebecca to class, but it is your story, and i could kinda see it happen, but it would still be kinda weird, but i think that you could make it work. can i make a predicition/guess thingy? is the rapist/dad voldy?? my friend wrote [and still is writing] a fan fic where i think the main characters mom gets raped by him or something like that..i don't remeber
BUT GOOD NEWS!! CHAPTERS 4 AND 5 ARE OUT FOR OBLIVION AND MY JAMES/LILY STORY IS VALIDATED AS WELL! I AM SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT AND I HOPE YOU DON'T HATE ME! i have about half of chapter 7 written, and 6 needs to be finished [as in typed] on the computer, and that should hopefully be out by the end of may..possibly even sooner, i have a swim meet-ish fundraiser thing this weekend and much work to do [damn finals] so any writing chances are limited a whole bunch.
but all in all a great start to a story! keep up the good work and i hope to see the next chapters to the rest of your stories
DON'T FORGET TO CHECK OUT OBLIVION/THE WEDDING [my Lily and James story]

love,
vera

Author's Response: Vera you are always brightning my day with your reviews! OFCOURSE I'll R&R YOUR STORIES... you should realise by now that i adore them!!!!!! I completely understand the entire swim-meet finals debacle.. im going through the same.. i cannot wait for summer, then i can just relax. Anyway I'm going to go and read your stories now... *im uber excited!*
love,
Mads

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this is a great story though pretty impossible. I think you should break up the paragraphs and add more dialogue because they r really long.

Author's Response: wooooowwwwww!!!!! i loove that ur so concerned that u had to write it twice! :P I'll try and keep that in mind for the next chapters! I always apreciate reviews!!!!
Maddie


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this is a great story though pretty impossible. I think you should break up the paragraphs and add more dialogue because they r really long.

Author's Response: im going to add more dialogue once more characters are involved. I will admit that its rather unbeleivable but by no means impossible. Thanks for the review. Your opinions really matter and make it easier for me to write. xox
Mads

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that was good :) cant wait to read the rest. if you have the time could you read and review my story? it would be muchly apreciated

Author's Response: I'll definately read ur story! I'll check it out now! Thanks for the review!
Mads

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heys
the story is good
but the maraders have to be in it!
i realy dont like the pregnancy thing but
this story has a great plot
please update
you have a fan waitin on ya
i know this story is good
so please dont disapoint moi
update sooon please

Author's Response: I'll try to update it as soon as i can.. my life is craaazzzzzyyy right now.. alot of stuff is going on soo i'll do my best!
Mads

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i love the idea for the story please update soon

Author's Response: lol thanks i'll do my best!
Mads

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um, u can't have a baby at 13.

Author's Response: Nor can you travel by broomstick... I guess thats why its called fiction. I already explained my reasoning behind the age. I know its unlikely... but I'm pretty sure it's also possible. So I'm sorry if you feel that way. you don't need to continue reading.

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my first reaction was 13! but i understand wanting rebecca to remember and relate to every one. i think it was a nice sweet opening but i can wait till rebecca a real people person gets introduced to the marauders

Author's Response: yeah... i have plans for that. I'll try and update quickly... thanks :)

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Interesting.
Update soon! I would love to see where this story goes.
I can't wait to see when the marauders come in. =]
10/10

Author's Response: Yes I do enjoy those marauders!
Mads

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Aww! So sweet!
I really like how the narrator doesn't regret her decision to have the child and she seems to have gotten over the rape pretty well.
Keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks.... im soo busy right now but hopefull I can get a chapter up this weekend... hopefully!

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Great first chapter! I can tell that this story will turn out great! Keep updating.

xo
Hula

Author's Response: Aww thanks!

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I really liked this story, and i wish that you would update it soon.

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, but the queu is 10 days long so really there isn't a point in updating until there's less people in validation! But this time will give me time to write ahead wich means i can get the other chapters out soon... atleast thats what I'm hopping!

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I think that's it's interesting so far and I really want to know where it goes! So please update soon!

Author's Response: I'lll try and get an update out this weekend if the queus aren't too long! Thanks for the review!
Mads

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