please write a sequel to this about their first date! Report Review
This is such a cute story! I've read it several times before, but as to the fact as why I've never commented on it is a shame! A horrible sad shame! It's a wonderful story. Full of romance and comedy. Great job! Report Review
I was totally digging the line from pride and prejudice.Author's Response: A line from Pride & Prejudice? I didn't even know that I'd put one! O_O Oh, well. If it makes the story better, I like it! -Kelsey Report Review
that was pretty good. I do think the ending would have been more realistic if they tried to stay friends for Ron.Author's Response: Point taken, but keep in mind that Ron is trying to push Harry away in the story (at the moment anyway), and Harry isn't quite ready to make up with him. Thanks for the review! -Kelsey Report Review
That was so sweet. Bless em, i was laughing at most of that. Very good.Author's Response: Thanks! -Kelsey Report Review
I liked this story very much. Really cute (a good way cute). It was simply sweet, and I loved it :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I always thought that romance should be sweet, not emotionally-hurt-each-other-until-you-randomly-snog-in-the-middle-of-a-battle. Cough, cough, JKR. Report Review
Kawaii desu nee! (Japanese for: "It very cute!") Nice work. 10/10!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Merci beaucoup! Gracias! Hehe, I love different languages! Report Review
Awww there are like little kids lol Brill story lol HugsAuthor's Response: Yeah, I guess they are like little kids! Well, they always have to act like adults, it's about time they got to be 14-and-15-year-olds for once! "I... er... like you in that other way too"! Hehe, go 'Mione. Report Review
I said this to one other person in a review. It's about the highest compliment I can pay a good Harmony story. My dentist is going "cha-ching!" Seriously, excellent work. You really captured the essence of Harry and Hermione with that walk around the lake. Too bad JK Rowling couldn't see that. 10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment, even if I don't get it! ;) I always thought that the walks they took should have started something, but alas, JKR is a Heron. Thank you so much for your kind words! -Kelsey Report Review
That was great, I loved it!Author's Response: Oooh, thanks! I wasn't sure about this fic, but it just popped into my head and hey, a writer does what a writer has to do! -Kelsey Report Review
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