OhMiGawd! This was awesome! You should defiantly write a sequel but maybe extend it a few chapters more maybe... I loved this! Report Review
He he he Maddy... you writ very very very strange stories! Mwa ha ha ha ha! Report Review
Wow! That's weird alright. But i liked it in a funny way. I think maybe you should put a littke more text before and after the Bellatrix/Voldemort scene. Other then that i really enjoyed it and i laughed a lot when her daughter was about to perform Avada Kedavra on her father!
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Marauders001 Report Review
i don't think that it's strange i think that it's cute
-livee Report Review
“No Victoria! Do not do it on Daddy!”
That really made me laugh! :)
It was an interesting take and I enjoyed it ... !
Good Job! 10/10 Report Review
Interesting, I'd prefer a little more back story on Voldemort's old crush - and would Bellatrix really be crying about Rudolphus, after all she is in love with Voldemort. Nicely written Report Review
"no not at daddy"
hahahahahahahahahaha maddy it sort of reminds me.
of a little game once upon a time...
*sorry people we are very childish*
you genius you
twas very good.a bit you know ...WEIRD
yet genius...i assure you Report Review
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I loved the story. I hated the epilogue. Seriously, the entire thing was great, it had me looking at things in a different way, it did for me to the Harry Potter series what the book Wicked did to The Wizard of Oz. And then I hit the epilogue, and the wonderful review I was going to give you died. The two were so out-of-character that I could have practically replaced the word Bellatrix with Ginny and the word Voldemort with Harry. Take off the epilogue, and you have an amazing story. 6/10 (would have been a nine or ten, w/o epilogue)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sorry you hated the epilogue, but that was sort of the point! Bellatrix and Voldemort were supposed to change! I may consider changing the epilogue slightly :) Report Review
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