{reviewid: 2532262, reviewer: 'yoana'}
9th June 2011:
good chapter update soon :)
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{reviewid: 2123703, reviewer: 'Harrypotterfanforever'}
24th May 2009:
That was great! Please Please Please update soon! I want to read the rest it's such a great story.
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{reviewid: 2123699, reviewer: 'Harrypotterfanforever'}
24th May 2009:
I really liked it.I also liked how you described Harry that was really good. But I'm not entirely sure Hermione would use Harry like that but it's a fanfic so who cares.
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{reviewid: 1892497, reviewer: 'hermes34'}
11th April 2008:
hermione iws going to fall 4 harry isn't she
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{reviewid: 1891065, reviewer: 'Miss%20Haggan'}
10th April 2008:
good story, but I don't like the way Hermionie is using Harry.
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{reviewid: 1885856, reviewer: 'apAidan'}
5th April 2008:
very well begun. classic Hermione, very analytical, but driven to desperate measures by Ron. And the looking back voice works for what you've done, so far.
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{reviewid: 1875110, reviewer: 'Gryffindorgirl777'}
| Review #7, by Gryffindorgirl777 | A Plan |
24th March 2008:
He He I love it! I can't wait for the next chappie. Ginny is so evil! lol
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{reviewid: 1860477, reviewer: 't.s.'}
11th March 2008:
This sounds like the beginning of a fantastic story.
Keep up the good work!
Can´t wait for the next chapter!!
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{reviewid: 1858422, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
9th March 2008:
Sound's like a plan. but should she really go into it INTENDING to hurt Harry by using him. That's not Hermione's style. I'm interested to see where this goes. Post more soon.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1857313, reviewer: 'BritishBoysLover'}
8th March 2008:
Preety good. Everyboy seemed to be in character. Except Ginny. That's my only complaint. Otherwise, love your wordchoice and imagery! 9/10!
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{reviewid: 1856144, reviewer: 'Ariana_Moonfleet'}
7th March 2008:
I like how you've immediately began by establishing the relationship of Luna with Ron, I would love to see where that goes! Having a jealous Hermione is a new one to be, think it's a good way to go!
I do want to read more! so no worries there, it's good!! (I'm a harsh critic normally! I swear!)
Some negatives for you, well not negatives, merely some improvements, just spacing, a lot of people have problems with this, double spacing in between paragraphs and sub headings to use the physical space on the sheet to show the space in time...
If you want to rant at me or discuss, feel free to contact me,
Ariana x
Ariana_moonfleet@hotmail.co.uk
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{reviewid: 1855914, reviewer: 'kyley'}
7th March 2008:
fricken hermione better eventually fall for harry or ELSE!
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{reviewid: 1855702, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
7th March 2008:
that a cute, good start, can't wait for more!
9/10
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{reviewid: 1855446, reviewer: 'Phoenixes_fire'}
6th March 2008:
Lol really cute! I love the last bit where she whispers "Harry."
That made me laugh :D
As for ideas for the story that entirely up to you my dear :D Think about personal experiences maybe, that usualy helps me :).
Author's Response: thank you :)
you just made my day
i was really nervous with this story it was my first one
thank you so much :)
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