that was awesome please write more this is so good.Author's Response: Thanks :) you are the first review in months, I might actually write more now :) Sad as it sounds, you have actually made my day
Another awesome chapter! I really love this story! Especially how Lily and her friends interact. I mean, flicking a pea at Frank sounds like something I would do to one of my friends...not that i'm mean, the pea flicking would only be done in a strictly nonviolent, comical way. hope next chapter is as awesome as this one!Author's Response: thank you very much!!! i loved that bit too. i have read lots of stories with james/lily but some people dont have her interacting very much, they portray her as a bit of a loner. but i can hardly believe lily to be like that at all!!!!!!
i like little things like pea flicking (not that i am mean either :s) but when i write them its like the undaring side of me coming out, like something i would love to do, but i just never have the nerve!! anyhoo, i am rambling a lot so i will leave you to read in peace!!!
thanks very much for the review!!
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i think it could be really good. hope u keep goingAuthor's Response: thank you very much, i ope it turns out ok too!! it is quite a hard story to write because so many people have done the james/lily idea but hopefully i will keep going!! thanks for the review and the support :) Report Review
This is good!
I looovvve it!
AmyAuthor's Response: ok, more soon, i promise :D thanks for reviewing
I really like this story! This last chapter was excellent, i can't wait to find out how james is going to appease Lily this time. keeep up the good work!Author's Response: YAY thanks, i will update soon!! Report Review
i really like your story and am looking forward for more of it.Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, i will update a.s.a.p!! Report Review
Looking forward to your next chapterAuthor's Response: YAY thanks, I will start writing now!! Report Review
I read both chapters and I inmidiatelly wanted more I hope you add a new chapter!!!Author's Response: You are the person thats motivated me to write more!! As soon as the nest chapter is done I will update the story. Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
I like your story, but would it be possible to add a little spacing in-between the lines? It's kinda hard to read. Otherwise it's great!Author's Response: sorry, that was a mistake!! heehee the next chapter has spacing though, i only realised after it was validated that you couldn't read a word of it
sowwee :) Report Review
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