Love it. It was funny and sweet and well a million other things.
Please keep writing this story is really good :) Report Review
Loved this part it made everything more real.
I love Sirius he's my favoutrite character and i think it's cool that he got to have a daughter :) Report Review
I absolutely loved this chapter! Sirius and Alla are so hilarious together and her relationship with George is just adorable. I love Alla's quirkiness, that she undoubtedly inherited from her father, especially her aversion to all things girly. It truly makes her a more like-able character. Can't wait for more! =)Author's Response: Awww thanks, I kind of based Alla off from myself, I hate all the girly stuff, I like a lot of boy stuff. And Sirius was my favorite character before George. And thanks so much once I get the computer in my room I will be able to type them up quicker. Report Review
aww, i like this story!!
its very good and you describe things very well.
do you still want a banner?
if you do email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
:]Author's Response: Awwww thanks, yes please I will mail you. mine is email@example.com so you don't get alarmed. I'm working on the next chapter to bad they blocked this in school Report Review
Awww, this fic is so cute. The banter between Remus, Sirius, and Alla is golden! Poor Georgey sure is acting bashfu, lol, can't wait for more soon! ^^Author's Response: I'm writing the 4th chapter in school so I can save it on my flash drive and then bring it home so that I can post it here. And thanks I thought it was great to hve Sirius her real father. Than Remus was the one to take care of her after Sirius was caught. Report Review
Hey that was beautiful
better than you know whoAuthor's Response: why thank you. I know its better then hers. due to its me writing it all muhahahahahahhaha. anyway thanks again for the review. Report Review
Hey that was very interesing story. LOVE ITAuthor's Response: thank you so much. I know its great and you should be happy. your the first reviewer I have right now.
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