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Review #1, by Girldetective85 The Perfect Kiss

22nd October 2008:
Hey!! Long time no talk :D I'm trying to go through all of my favorite authors' one-shots and short stories for the Reviewfest, so here I am! I loved this piece. James/Lily is a wonderful pairing and you've done it justice for sure. I like that this is the beginning of their relationship and James is chivalrous enough to want to hold back and not move things too fast. I love that his friends helped out in initiating their first kiss. James is such a sap! Imagining that it would happen somewhere romantic, but I loved Lily's response: “Don’t you realise that even in this dusty, antique store,” she said, gesturing around the place, “as long as you and me are together, everything’s perfect?” You did a beautiful job, this is a very touching Valentine's Day story. 10/10

Author's Response: Hello to my current favourite author on the archive! ;D I saw the reviews you left me; allow me to thank you now for all of them. :) I'm glad you liked this. I'm not too comfortable with writing fluff, haha, but well, this was for a Fic Exchange. :D

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Review #2, by SadForSirius The Perfect Kiss

10th April 2008:
Aww! That was...awww!

Author's Response: Sweet eh? Thanks for reviewing! :)


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Review #3, by thediarywithin The Perfect Kiss

2nd April 2008:
Haha, the marauders come to the rescue...I was waiting for them to come in and help James and Lily along. Great job.

Author's Response: LOL. :) The idea hit me and I found it crazy and funny and so decided to use it. Glad you liked this. :)


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Review #4, by Zaphira The Perfect Kiss

26th March 2008:
Aww, cute!
I do love some good fluff.
And that was of the best kind!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do enjoy writing light stuff once in a while. :D

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Review #5, by JeNnIfEr The Perfect Kiss

1st March 2008:
that was a cute story

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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Review #6, by EvansPotter The Perfect Kiss

27th February 2008:
well written; i loved and enjoyed it. 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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Review #7, by JamesBlackPower The Perfect Kiss

25th February 2008:
aww! that was romantic! great job!1
:)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #8, by misswhiting The Perfect Kiss

25th February 2008:
totaly cute, I loved it

Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #9, by Flourish and Blotts The Perfect Kiss

25th February 2008:
awww! lovely work! it's perfect for valentine's day. :)

Author's Response: Oh, is it? :) Thank you! :)

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