i love the fact that this isnt all lovey dovey from the start
makes the plot so much interestin to see the two fight at first...makes the love more real Report Review
Haha this is great! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon:) Report Review
Interesting. Yes I am vague. Report Review
WRITE MORE PLEASE! ITS SO GOOD AND THERES ONLY 1 CHAPERER LOL! PLEASE! WRITE MORE! Report Review
This is really good!! You have totally got to update soon!! Awesome though! Report Review
interseting very interesting a tad rushed and a bit confusing but good all the same! Report Review
I love it! that was a really good start, Ron and Hermione's reactions to the letter were very believable. the only thing was that it was kind of short.
the banner is really good by the way. Rose looks just like i imagined. Report Review
ok. i haven't reviewed a story in a while, but i came across this one and really enjoyed your opener. your writing is excellent, minus a few spelling/grammatical mistakes, but i'm not a teacher, so no worries. interesting take on scorpius and rose. i can't even begin to describe how much i dislike rose/scorpius fics that have them falling in love at 11 years old. i can definately live with a 7th year romance. please keep up the good work. cheers. Report Review
Very promising start! Excellent writing.
I look forward to the next chapter! Report Review
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