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Review #1, by kara101 Seamus Murphy

17th March 2008:
Hey!

This was good. You could definitely work with this more I think. I think it would be a lot better of a story if you added more detail, like the kiss for instance. Or what M looks like. Overall nice job, keep it up. Send me a PM on the forums when your on, and I think you should make a meet the author thread sometime.

Kara

Author's Response: Hey Thanks! I know I could have worked with more detail, but it couldn't be a novel, and it's hard to write in one sitting. Especially with Grunt Two poking around...

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Review #2, by SilverThimble Seamus Murphy

12th March 2008:
ah, interesting! A McGonagall romance... I always knew she was the type to have a long-lost love :)

The accents were pretty good, no cheesiness at least. Or "top o' the mornin' ". Plot was interesting as well

I'd just say that it was a bit rushed and there was definitely more room for description, and so on. Like Alfonso and seamus' duel, I would have liked to see some detail there.

Thanks for entering my challenge, I enjoyed reading your story! (I'm sorry for the short review by the way)

Author's Response: Thanks! I know I needed more description, but I sat at my computer for two hours, and I wanted it to end. I knew this story was going to be fun, but McGonagal in this story is loosely based of the character M from James Bond.

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