lol this is a really interesting one and i def want to find out what happens
update quickly por favor :] Report Review
i hope you update pronto! This is a really neat story!!
Cheers! Report Review
i read you r AN/: and i hope you recovered XD
i think for saftys sake everyone should carry a hardback copy of OOTP in their bag so they can just bash people round the head with it when they try to steal their bag.
another great chapter
silver_serpentAuthor's Response: HAHAHA! I am SO doing that from now on! I'll probably pack Breaking Dawn in there too :) the thing is like a dictionary! :| :D xx Report Review
hahaha, yesh mate! Chavin it up massive!(im not a chav btw)
so good to find a writer from Britain when every one on this site seems to say mom instead if mum.
ive loved all of your chapters so far and id just like to say torchwood is a-may-zing and that i heartt Jacks coat XD
omgawd I hope kerris is ok (but im gessing that she must be as at the moment there are three more posted chapters to read ;p)
keep writing, keep updating and don't do drugs, or self-harming, and keep that knife crime down britain!(good call) But who really need school? probably me.
10/10Author's Response: hahaha, I'm not a chav either ;) I know everyone on here is from all over the US and it's the wtf Harry Potter is english. Torchword IS amazing!! :) My friend has a coat like Jack's :o haha I need school too, I'm a little too dumb it can cause problems :S Thanks for the awesome review my English matey! (I refuse to say buddy) :D :D x Report Review
Hey, umm you said on ur disclaimer that anything i recongnize is JKR's. Not Only. YOur Summary is the same summary i have read on a book, at my local book store. THAT is plagirismAuthor's Response: Oh okay sorry, which book is it, because I honestly made up my own summary :) Report Review
Awesome! Me lurves you're story! :D Please write more xAuthor's Response: More coming soon dont you worry x Report Review
Yay!!! You finally updated!!! I really liked this chapter, please update very soon, I can't wait to see what happensAuthor's Response: Hahaha I know sorry I took so long but to be honest I didn't think anyone liked this story so I just had a BIG writers block and left it :/ But it's all good now :) Report Review
I love it! it wasnt james!! I think its Snape now lol xxxAuthor's Response: Hahahaha!! :D I'm not saying anthing!! Report Review
yo rock on!!! Love your story. Please let it all go on being wonderfullAuthor's Response: Haha I'll try :S hopefully you'll like the next one!
Thanks for the reviewio YOU ROCK DUDE!! Report Review
Who is it?! PLEASE put the next chapter up soon I really want to find out!! Favourite quote:
'Mary and Alice both slowly made their way towards the bathroom, however Alice got in first, leaving Mary to walk straight into the closed door seeing as she had both of her eyes shut and seemed to be taking, what only Lilly could assume to be, a nap walk.'
I always take nap walks!! on the way to school!Author's Response: I take nap walks to, on the way to my science lessons :) Report Review
Oh my god! I'm so sorry to hear what happened! You sound like you've been through the wars! do you live in a rough area or was it just a one off conicidense? Favourite quote:
'“CPR.” said James almost immediately.
“What?” asked Sirius confused.
James turned to him “Mouth to mouth!” he said frantically.
“You want me to do it?!” Sirius asked incredulously.
“Well I can’t I’m her brother!” said James.
“JUST DO IT!” roared James.'
It shows that James cares loads about Kerris, CUTE!Author's Response: Haha! One off time you know :D thanks again! Report Review
Aww! so cute! especially towards the end. Really clears things up with her friends and all that. Yay! Natalie isn't a bitch! I love your style of writing! It really makes you connect with the characters! Favourite quote:
'“OH DAVE!” shouted Natalie in a very sexual way, causing many people nearby to give her odd looks.
“Shut up Natalie!” said April flushing red.
“Wo!” Natalie shouted, teasing April. “Maybe he’ll wear gloves.” she said winking at her.
“LA LA LA, I CANT HEAR YOU!”'Author's Response: Haha :) yeah It lets you know that NAtalie and the gang aren't bitches Woo Hoo! Report Review
Favourite quote: '“Acting like your in a prostitute house.” said McGonagall without a trace of embaressment in her voice, she actually said it very coolly, not even looking up from her papers.'
I think I nearly wet myself at that!
poor Kerris, what two-faced cow her 'mates' are! But still you gotta love Natalie!Author's Response: Aye, they do seem like cows but you gotta read the next one!! and yeah I love Natalie, she's one of them characters who just really doesn't give a crap about people's opinions except from her friends, but she's also one who isn't the main character but who is people's favourites :) Report Review
OOH! The game is ON! Aww, poor Kerris, she's only talking to Reglus and plus he doesn't seem to bad. He's talking about pineapple for christ's sake! cute :) Favourite quote:
'“What?” Kerris asked, completely bewildered and affronted, by Rochelle shitty opinion.' Author's Response: Hahaha I've got a lot of feedback on the pineapple!! haha!! I know Reglus is cute :) or is he?? Rochelle does have pretty shitty opinions :) Report Review
Oh, I miss easter, I got a Roses one last year :) it was yummy! I really should get to bed, because it's like 1:28am and I'm meant to be getting up for school in like six and a half hours! But I cant because I love this story too much!! Favourite quote:
'"I've eaten too much!" groaned Kerris
"I'm on my period!" added Natalie in a groan.
Kerris blinked at Natalie.
"Not something you wanna say that loud, Nat."'Author's Response: :o I did that once, stayed up all night until about five in the morning and I had to be at school!! not good!! :D Report Review
Again, so funny, made me laugh out loud so many times! Oooh! a bit of Reglus conflict!! Sirius wont be happy. Is that why they didn't come to the compartment?! :O. Favourite quote:
'“Don’t worry madam!” she said in a powerful voice to Kerris, offering her hand “I shall save you from this evil fiend!”'Author's Response: And that he isn't! most probably :D thanks again for your most wanted review!! x Report Review
Haha! soo funny! aw, Sirius is noticing her!! so cool! Favourite quote:
'“You’re an idiot.” stated Sirius before James got there. “I had to stop my conversation with a very fit girl because of you.”
“Oh no.” said Kerris in mock concern, biting her fingers.'Author's Response: yeah I didn't want it to be a 'oh-my-god-i've-just-realised-I-love-her' moment. ;) more realistic :D Thanks for the awesomeo reviewio :) x Report Review
So funny! favourite quote:
'“You turned sixteen a few weeks ago.” corrected Sirius. Kerris glared at him
“And you two didn’t even bother getting me a birthday present!” Kerris said.
“Let’s not change the subject,” said James'
Love it!Author's Response: haha thanks!! Report Review
This story is so good! Post more soon! I want to find out who it is!Author's Response: You shall you shall soon enough! Report Review
awww, siri-poo luves her!!!
-cocoAuthor's Response: HAHAHA! you crack me up marmite! (my mate) Report Review
dont worry, most storys are crappy at the begining.
-cocoAuthor's Response: Haha! Good, at least I'm not the only one, but I'm thinking about rewriting the first chapter :/ Thanks for reviewing!! x Report Review
Great story I hope that you update soon i can't wait to see what happens!Author's Response: Thanks!! The update is coming soon! Report Review
This story sounds so good
... until you use a Jonas brother picture for Sirius
... thats just wrongAuthor's Response: In my defense, that was only used for his hair. I do not like the Jonas brothers. Report Review
Ooh i like this story lol, I think its James :P
Update soon please
xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks! Maybe it's James, Maybe it's not :) I've finished the next three chapter and i'll try and get them out as soon as vampirely possible! :) Report Review
I love this story! From the moment I found it, I had to read it all in one sitting and now I'm starving because I missed lunch. So keep updating okay? :)Author's Response: Awww thank you so muchas! Sorry I made you miss lunch, I know how that feels, I get grumpy when I don't have enough to eat. Teenage hormones and all that jazz. But I do love my food. I'm sorry, where was I? Oh right updating, yeppp I shall soon, the next chapter is in the queue. I think :S If it's not it will be soon ;) x Report Review
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