I actually really liked this!
I didn't think I would when I read the words "exotic dancer"

But update soon!

Author's Response: i know i probably would think the asme thing!~

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aw
that made me sad=[
update though i like it

Author's Response: Thanks i have acouple more chapters i need to post but ive been busy with my main story the return you should check it out hint hint

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this was a good story - but for some reason it almost made me laugh! Good writing... but strange subject - very Alternate Universe..
well done xx

Author's Response: Yes it was a really random thought actualy i read a book about a read headed stripper so i was like alright i can work with it! lol glad you laughed i laughed when i wrote it :)

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excellent start! i really like this story and i want to see what happens when the rest of the boys find out that was lily :)

Author's Response: I was going through some old note books and i actually found my orignal story of Heaven on earth so i am going to rewrite it but i am trying to update my other stories so it might be a while

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oh this is so good but what happened to chloe is she alive ?

Author's Response: Well u will have to read the next chapter to find out about her... its a bit sad but i cant have had it be Harry yet so ... thanks for reading!!

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