Wow I think that it was a little harsh that Andromeda got sent to bed because she simply smiled at the Malfoy's. But that is the way of Pure blood families I suppose. This plot is really good and I hope that you will update soon.

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I liked this chapter. The nice chat, and sisterly bonding moment between Bella and Cissy. Andromeda was of course on the receiving end of their jokes. I also enjoyed the part where Druella explains that Narcissa has a great marriage lined up. You have great characterization in this story which also leads to a great plot line.

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I liked this chapter, it made me laugh when Narcissa told Lucius that he needed and attitude adjustment. I was slightly confused though, if you don't mind clearing something up. Is Lucius supposedly a first year when Narcissa is for the purposes of this story? Because according to HP Lexicon, Lucius is two years older than Narcissa which would make him Andromeda's age. I mean I don't think your story is bad if he is a first year or anything, but it wouldn't hurt to put it in your A/N that he is a first year so as not to confuse readers. To the next chapter.

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Lucius as a loving guy? Not too hard for me to Imagine, I like that you write him that way. I love the line towards the beginning: Just because my husband is a death eater doesn't make him a bad person, just because Dumbledore started the Order of the Phoenix doesn't make him perfect. How true this is. Nobody is all bad and not one person is perfect, so you did a good job of subtly reminding us readers of that. Good job. Onward to the next chapter

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Sorry its taken me so long to review this chapter, i haven't been at home much. Yet again i love it! As for my name I actually meant Gisbourne as in Sir Guy of Gisbourne from Robin Hood.

Author's Response: It's all good :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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~ginny_malfoy22

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wow you instantly had me hooked! I cant wait to carry on!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're hooked! I will try, try, try reall really hard to update soon!

Gisbourne? As in Gisbourne, New Zealand?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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please write more as soon as possible cause it is a amazing story. Thx!!!
Ellie

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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PLEASE update soon!I love this story!

Author's Response: I will try to update soon! I'm writing chapter 4 at the moment, and will try to put it up asap! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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Wow! this is so good so far and I havent even read the rest of the story! I luv Narcissa/Lucius stories so much! Ihate when people make Lucius out to be this horrible person! Anyway, good job! Off to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! And Lucius is a horrible person, but I guess it is a bit overdone! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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This story is really good, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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*I'm new to this and do not know how detailed reviews are supposed to be . I have no quals, just uninformed opinion.*
I like the choice of Narcissa and Lucius. The are a tatalising pair and the books give us little and that little raises as many questions as it answers. So good choice. I liked the interaction between the sisters. Good touch introducing Bella's as amoral and establishing Andromeda and Tonks. I am supprised., given the shame of being a Hufflepuff that the family would tollerate this association. I'm interested enough to want to read more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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~ginny_malfoy22

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This was funny! I just love the interaction between the three sisters, and its funny to see Bella so proud that shes a prefect. Andromeda's attitude towards Bella is exactly how I would have imagined it. I like the mothers bitterness to Andromeda being in Hufflepuff. Very in charactar. And you've written her rebellion against hating muggle borns really well, I liked it. And using Floo powder instead of 'muggle transport' was a really good idea to show their house pride. The conversations about the pure blood and 'bad egg' were funny but really realistic. I liked it. I really enjoyed this chapter because it was great to see Pure blood pride instead of the oppisate which is what were used to. Excellent!

Author's Response: FINALLY! You're last review...for now! Anyway, I'm really trying to show the whole pure-blood supremacy thing, since they're Black's. I'm glad you like it. So glad you like it, and all the other stories you read!
Thanks for reading and reviewing

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~ginny_malfoy22

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I just had to come read this because your idea intrigued me. It'd be great to read a story that doesnt depict Lucious as this vicious monster. I like how Narcissa is telling us that if she'd had listened to the rumours, she wouldnt be with him. liked how she mentioned Dumbledore not being perfected either, this is really setting out the story. This was a really great introductory chapter and I really felt like Narcissa was talking to me, which was nice. Your writting style is really good, and from what Ive seen. I like the way you characterised Narcissa.

Author's Response: Oooh, I'm glad you like it. And Narcissa is talking to you...well, to anyone who reads it, but whatever.
Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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i loved it :-D
although i wouldn't think her mother would like andromeda to marry a muggle, was it not the fact that she did that tarnished her and that she was in slytherin, sirius being the only one not in slytherin, or am i believing my own story to be true lol
10/10 and added to my favourites

Author's Response: You're probably right, but I felt I needed to show that the Crabbe and Goyle families are the absolute last people in the society. And Druella wouldn't like Adromeda to marry a Muggle, she would rather being able to disown her, so there's no shame on their family.

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Great chapter once again! I really like the way you're characterizing Narcissa and giving her a great personality. You're really starting to make her character real, other than 'Draco's mother.' I also think you've done Lucius well so far. He seems like the jerk we all know.. no bad egg in his family. I'm sure he'd be a pretty annoying kid. Anyways, great job with this story so far!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really enjoying writing, and I'm glad you're enjoying reading it!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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woop woop
excellent
mine is similar tells the story of Lucius and Narcissa
but not from school though
please update soon :-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

I'll check out your story soon! Lucius and Narcissa are pretty interesting!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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~ginny_malfoy22

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Sorry it took me so long to get over here to read this. I really like this so far! I sent this ship because I've never really read a Narcissa/Lucius ship before and I just find it interesting. No one's touched on the subject too much. Anyways, I like the start of this so far. It's nice to see into Narcissa's mind and to see her thoughts and beliefs about her husband. I love that she says that he's not too bad of a guy, though I guess we'll see how true that is. So great job so far with this and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: That''s ok, I haven't really noticed, you could've reviewed ages ago without me noticing. Anyway, I'm glad you like it. I've seen people do this kind of thing with Harry/Ginny, but we know too much about them, rather boring really. But that's kinda where I got this idea, but I get much more creative space, which is good :). Anyway, glad you enjoyed it, I don't know when I will update, but I will inform you as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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I like it so far! You've sparked my interest to see what happens! Please update sooN!

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks, I'm glad I've sparked your interest! The first chapter (as it was the prologue haha) will be up in about two weeks, possibly less!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~ginny_malfoy22

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