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Wow. this is going to be something special.
I can feel it.
The story is a little fast paced for me, but then again, your writting style is different to mine, so i respect that. I really hope you up date soon, as i am getting hyped up and excited.
Please keep me informed of updates.
Great workAuthor's Response: wow, thank you so much for your kind review
and yes, i will be updating, as soon as my other story is done Report Review
Well I have to admit, when I first read the title of your story I was scared stiff, worried that you were writing about a story I have been drafting for at least a year. But I am pleased (and relieved) that you have not.
This was a really good story, although I did see a few errors. The two main ones being.
1) (Harry Potter falling for a Mudblood like me?!) I just can not see Hermione calling herself that, she is to proud of herself to think so low of herself.
2) Comments such as (Harry Potter falling for a Mudblood like me?!) and (happily now that she knew this was going to be the girlfriend of Harry Potter.) I believe are slightly out of character. Such sentences create the image that Hermione is focused on the (fame) of Harry, and not Harry as a person and in there relationship it has always been the opposite.
Hermione has always been Harrys friend, not his admirer, (That’s more of a Ginny thing) Just a little advise, I am by no means flaming you for this.
This is a really good story, and I can not wait to read the next chapter.
And thank you for the great review. Report Review
a bit short but still a good chapter, can't wait for the next one.Author's Response: yeah i know, but ch. 3 is WIP :)
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It's Not Bad...
In Fact I'm Looking 4ward 2 d Next Chapter!
xoxoSteffiBlackAuthor's Response: thanks, and yes ch.2 is in waiting =] Report Review
Wow! This is really good! Keep going!Author's Response: thanks, and i will
-thank you for the review! :) Report Review
I love it, normally i don't like straying from original pairings, but this one seems quiet good. Please update soon!Author's Response: thanx, i'm glad you like it!
-ch.2 is in waiting, so should be up pretty soon
thank you for the review! :) Report Review
Good job on this chapter and for posting chapter two so quickly :)Author's Response: haha yeah i know, i posted it a little too quickly, but oh well :)
-glad you liked the first ch., and thanx for the review! :) Report Review
interesting idea for the story, good chapter,can't wait for the next one to see where this goes.Author's Response: thanx, yeah i just posted the next chapter :)
should be up should be up next thrus.
-thanks for the review Report Review
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