nice chapter. I got a bit confused at the beginning because their names were so similar, but I worked it out eventually :P
I loved the ending. The whole "A Black forevermore" thing. It was very powerful.
Maybe a Andromeda or Regulus for the next one. Or if you want to do someone less known, then maybe Sirius' mother and how she became to be the horrible person she is, and what her turning point was.
But I don't know, they are just suggestions. I think I'll love the next one no matter what you write. Report Review
I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY! My friend recommended your stories to me. If you could take a few seconds to read her stories as well, please do! she really wants some reviews and she only has two and they are both from friends and she would like your opinion on them. her name is rachel evans potter, and she's a huge fan of yours and would really appreciate a review especially from you. The same thing applies for me thanks for listening. KEEP WRITING!!! its awsome! Report Review
this is an adorable story and you do an exelent job capturing the real feel of Sirius being sorted in to Gryffindor. 10/10 Report Review
I really like one-shots and this one wasn't an exception. Amazing, thanks :] Report Review
wow, i really liked this story. you did a great job =) Report Review
This is a very nice one-shot. I thought you captured Sirius's thoughts very well, it seemed pretty acurate to me. I'm sure Jo Rowling herslef would give you a gold star for characterization. I am impressed. Good Job! 10/10
ps, you might think about expanding this into a short story... Report Review
that was nice...good job Report Review
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