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Review #1, by canadian_wolf

The Fall out and The Plan.

23rd March 2008:

I love it! Update soon!

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Review #2, by patronus_girl

The Fall out and The Plan.

17th March 2008:

I love it! i like the way it is james who is hurt instead of lily which i s what always happends Cant wait for your next chapter!

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Review #3, by marauderluverz

The Fall out and The Plan.

25th February 2008:

Alright. Great story idea. The story is a bit rough. For instance i didn't understand what James and Lily fought about(i understood the thing about him not kissing her but still) and Lily got over James realy quickly(but i dont mind that to much) maybe u could look it over and find the things that ure readers wont understand. Oh and try using spellcheck it might help. Overall i give it a 8/10 plz keep writing. Practice makes perfect. ;) Plz check out my stories.

Author's Response: well james and lily fight because lily says that there not really oing out and then james reacts and blurts out a break up line with out meaning too. as i said i have to get this beta-ed or something for spelling mistakes but i have to do other things for better stories first. this is just one i thought up of in between story's

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