4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by londonmarie Prologue

23rd February 2008:
Interesting. I hope you update soon.

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Review #2, by Eternity Prologue

23rd February 2008:
It definitely has potential, but may I kindly advise that you seek a beta, as a couple of times I was lost as to what was meant.

Hope you add more soon!

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Review #3, by Sidonie Prologue

23rd February 2008:
I really like it! You def. have talent. There's a lot of nice descriptive details in here.
If you proofread it a little before posting, it would be even more enjoyable :). (With spelling mistakes we can usually tell what's going on, but things like this sentence "Have I ever done anything towards you, without you provocing in out?" are hard to understand.)
Can't wait to find out what happens next!

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Review #4, by Lya Darkfury Prologue

23rd February 2008:
well i hope you decide to keep writing this story, it definitely has potential! I look forward to seeing what you do with it and how everything develops. =)

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