Wow. Seriously didn't expect that. Megan and Sirius? 17 year's difference? Well. We're in for an interesting year. Report Review
Well. It certainly works, and is a good story in general. Report Review
uhh isn't 17 years a big difference oh no what will james say! This is a really good story Report Review
hey hurry up and make new chapters and it was good Report Review
i love it =] can't wait for the rest keep up the awesome jobAuthor's Response: thank you!! the next chapter will be coming soon!!
Hmmm. Interesting idea. Not sure where you're going or how it will work out, but you have me interested so far. You do need to work on your proof reading a little. Some awkward expressions. Are beta's an official position or just someone that proof reads and assists the writer? You could use one alright. You have good ideas and story lines, but you need development as a writer. You're good, but a little raw. I'll check out your profile.Author's Response: Thank You!! When I write their dialouge i try to write as if they are really talking. You know nobody really talks proper, more like slang. But if its hard to read then I'll try to clean it up a bit. Thank you for your review!! Beta's are not an "official position" but they do proof read and helps the writer as much as possible. I do need one so if your interested or know somebody let me know. Report Review
You Put In HSM2 in it.
Do You Love HSM?
B'cuz I Do!
When's Next One Out?
xoxoSteffyAuthor's Response: I love HSM2!! i had just got done watching it and it seemed like the perfect song so yeah!! next chp coming soon!!! Report Review
thats awesome can't wait for the rest Report Review
is nice story, I really like it, I like reading fanfic that Harry parents and his godfather still alive. Can't wait to reading more chapter and Hhr getting together. I support you all the way. HHR 4ever Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection