I liked your story very much!
I would've liked him to be introduced to more ppl but I sensed this was just for the two of them... The speech made me cry a bit(which is always a good thing) lol!
Thanks for sharing this =)Author's Response: Aw, it's been so long, I thought I'd never get reviews again! Thanks Audrina, and sorry for the late response.
I think for Dudley's first real excursion into Harry's world, introducing him to too many people might have overwhelmed him a bit---although that would have been fun to write!
And yes, I did really want a cousin bonding moment type of thing. :)
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so i like this one shot. its a really original idea. i liked the idea of dudely starting what might be called the "reconciliation". i know technically harry started it, but from among the durselys. i also liked the snow melting as a metaphor. and randomly enough i suppose, i loved the descriptions of eating the mints. it seemed very realistic. anyway, this is a nicely written story, and its a nice concept to start off with. good job, thank you for writing this! ;)Author's Response: No, thank YOU for reading and reviewing this! I'm delighted that you liked this story so much and that you took the time to review. I'm being honest when I say that without reviewer support like yours, a lot of these stories likely wouldn't exist.
Thanks henryjones! Thank you for being such an awesome reviewer these past few days! Report Review
That was very thoughtfully and wonderfully presented, I thought.
The view of Harry's life from an almost-outsider's point of view was saddening, yet somehow it was relieving. Like someone, finally, could see the terrible physical effects upon Harry and wonder how much he had been through.
It made me very depressed and, perversely, I thank you for it.
xxAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm gald you got some emotion from it, and that you're not too upset that it's from Dudley's point of view. There are very few people out there who actually enjoy Dudley's character, and I'm glad that he didn't set you off from this story.
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Ah, I like this. It's nice reading stories from the point of view of a muggle. Very good piece.
Keep on writing!Author's Response: Thank you, Voldemora! I'm glad you liked this, and especially since it was written from the view of a muggle like Dudley.
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Hey, just want to say I really enjoyed this story! Were the melting of the snowflakes meant to be a metaphor for the dissolve of bad feelings between Harry and the Dursleys? I thought that was pretty awesome... :) Great job!!!Author's Response: Yes, yes, yes! It definitely was! Of course, snowflakes are really small in the greater scheme of things, so it's not like they can be dissolved all at once, but the boys were on their way to beginning to dissolve bad feelings!
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I think you did a good job. As I'm writing a story about Dudley, I love to see what other people think about him. I think you did a really good job at showing how out of place Dudley might feel in this situation, but also illustrated the similarities between the wizarding and muggle world. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed how Dudley felt in the situation, and I had a look at your story as well.
Best of luck with it, and again, thank you for your review here! I really appreciate it. Report Review
Its amazing i love it!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the reivew! Report Review
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