Reading Reviews for Iron Man
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Review #1, by Violet Gryfindor Malice Aforethought

23rd October 2008:
A vaguely familiar smile from the mysterious man? That's curious, I wonder who it is that Rose knows - could that have been the Iron Man? Poor Rose - I really feel sorry for her, she's very downtrodden by life, and is being too hard on herself on top of that. You've made her a very well-rounded character - it's like she could walk out of the screen, she's that real.

I'm really enjoying this story so far. :) The plot has caught my curiosity just as your writing has caught my interest - you have a wonderful story here. ^_^

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Review #2, by Violet Gryfindor The Inferno

23rd October 2008:
This is a great story so far! You write the characters very realistically, and it's interesting to see the next-generation characters in this light - outside of Hogwarts and already on their own. Rose is so tough and makes a fun lead character to read about - she has the worst luck! Jerry is an equally strong OC, and he interacts really well with Rose - I'm intrigued to see them working together. :P

It's wonderful to see another mystery-type story on the archive. They're so difficult to find, especially written as well as this. :D

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Review #3, by Billion The Inferno

13th April 2008:
Nice first chapter. I'm really liking this take on Rose and her job. Update soon!

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Review #4, by Anon The Inferno

27th February 2008:
Hey, this is really good. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews.
If I may make a recommendation, try joining up at Checkmated and posting there. This story deserves recognition and Checkmated is a good site for it.
A story like this shouldn't get lost amongst some of the trite stories here.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, it's good to hear that you think this story is worthy of recognition! As for your suggestion - I might just take you up on it, I've read some very excellent stories on that site.

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