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Reading Reviews for Invisible
14 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dundundun Invisible

8th January 2010:
that's such a sad story...
but i love it...
keep up the good work!

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Review #2, by jtothek42 Invisible

7th January 2010:
so cute! I like this alot!

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Review #3, by Lyall Invisible

7th January 2010:
This is beautiful :)

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Review #4, by saffy22100 Invisible

7th January 2010:

that is the saddest but cutest fan fic ever! i really likees this one . its really sweet.



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Review #5, by maggiepotterblack Invisible

6th January 2010:
aw the worst part is knowing that Natalie never really got her chance, james marries lily, has a son, dies, and Natalie is just there, forgotton and sad, hopefully she found someone else

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Review #6, by confusedlover Invisible

6th January 2010:
very lovely.

short, sweet, and to the chase. i liked this a lot. keep up the amazing work.

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Review #7, by kill the moonlight Invisible

6th January 2010:
This was simply beautiful. I don't usually read songfics, but this was just amazing. It didn't bore me at all. It's so sad to think that things like this happen everyday. ): Love stinks.
~Gabriella. five stars! *

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Review #8, by anonymous Invisible

24th June 2009:
that was so sweet and beautifully written

Author's Response: thank you so much.

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Review #9, by Natures Nobility Invisible

1st March 2009:
amazing song fic i love this song and i love this fic and i love james and lily!

Author's Response: thanks. i love the song too. i'm so glad you liked it.

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Review #10, by dracoslover1 Invisible

18th October 2008:
This was a very good song fic you have here. I think you could possibly make this into a short story or novella and have it still be good. I liked your characterizations and your descripitions. They were extremely well done. Way to go on such a good fic.

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Review #11, by Hermiones house elf Invisible

3rd June 2008:
totally awesome! 10/10

Author's Response: thanks

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Review #12, by _Kaitlyn_ Invisible

30th March 2008:
This is so sad! I listened to that song as I read. It definitely added to this already wonderful story. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks.

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Review #13, by Rosie Invisible

1st March 2008:
Aw unrequited love is so sad.
excellent fic!

Author's Response: thanks.

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Review #14, by harrypotterroxs Invisible

24th February 2008:
wow Alyssia. you've outdone yourself! lol! anyway nicely well done! 100-100! :)

Author's Response: thanks.

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