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Review #1, by Jenny Chapter Eleven

28th June 2016:
Please keep writing I'm loving it

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Review #2, by NotDobby Chapter Twelve

19th June 2016:
Little sad about the kiss but totally agree too soon. LOVE this new chapter. i hope yuu and yur family are doing well. Keep going
Clara x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, my family is doing well, thank you for asking! I'm glad you like the new chapter! More to come!

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Review #3, by NotDobby Chapter Eleven

14th June 2016:
I am very glad to hear everything is going grand :) love love love the new chapter but yuu are an evil woman for leaving it on a cliff hanger like that haha
clara x

Author's Response: Lol... Yes, I am evil for that. I just can't help it! Lol. Don't worry though... The new chapter will be posted on Friday! :)

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Review #4, by A FAN Chapter Eleven

11th June 2016:

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you! Yes, everything is much better now! Hermione is a smart girl, so fear not, she will find out... It's all a matter of when. :)

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Review #5, by NotDobby Chapter Ten

10th June 2016:
Hi I was just checking to see how this is going and also I hope yur family are doing OK. Clara x

Author's Response: Hi there! Things are going well! I'm about to post the next chapter! My family is doing very well, thank you so much for asking! I hope you enjoy the new chapter!! -Sarah

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Review #6, by songbird0345 Chapter Ten

22nd April 2016:
I love it! I hope all is well with your family, and if not, my condolences. You have definitely enticed me with your writing and with that, I hope you continue.

All my admiration,
A fellow Dramione shipper

Author's Response: Thank you so much! On both counts! My family is doing well, there's just a long road ahead of us. I'm hoping to be able to post again soon, but things are hectic right now. My writing has enticed you? Wow! What a wonderful compliment! Thank you! :D

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Review #7, by Clara Chapter Ten

16th April 2016:
Love love love it please continue asap! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will definitely be trying to post again as soon as I can! My mama is recovering from a very intense situation and it's a long road my family is traveling with her. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! :)

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Review #8, by a fan Chapter Ten

9th April 2016:
love it so much.I do not like that draco is stil with Astoria.good luck ...cant wait for next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! All of that will be sorted eventually. I promise! :)

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Review #9, by Jenny Chapter Ten

9th April 2016:
I really enjoyed the read I wish you'd continue it. You have a wonderful writing style.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will be continuing. I just have a very important family matter that is going to take up a lot of my time. :) I have all the chapters written, I just haven't edited them all yet. Don't worry! There's plenty more!! :)

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Review #10, by a fan Chapter Nine

2nd April 2016:
wow...I wish you would have Hermione see draco kiss .Astoria.but its getting very chapter please...

Author's Response: Lol! There is lots more to come in the Draco/Astoria plot line. :) I'm so glad you liked it!

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Review #11, by A fan Chapter Eight

26th March 2016:
Wow.I didn't think u would change her that much but very nice anyway wait till draco sees her..keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! I realized as I started writing this so many years ago that her physical appearance would need to change... Not really to the point of being completely unrecognizable, but a little drastically. The main thing I didn't want to change was who she is as a person, you know? I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the next chapter when it's posted! :)

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Review #12, by clara Chapter Eight

26th March 2016:
I am loving the new chapters so glad your continuing. quickly becoming your no1 fan haha please add more soon :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

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Review #13, by a fan Chapter Seven

19th March 2016:
I must say a few words that I love every chapter so just confused that you still have
Voldemort alive in this story...I thought it was after his time...please don't have any one killed

Author's Response: :) No, Voldemort is alive in this story. All I can say as far as not killing anyone is... No one has died so far! :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love the feedback! New chapter is coming up tonight!

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Review #14, by clara Chapter Six

13th March 2016:
I love it! please continue it soon im on edge here trying to think what it is haha it is great

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And don't worry! The next chapter is all set to go for my "scheduled" update time... (Look out for it Friday night!) Glad you're enjoying it!

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Review #15, by a fan Chapter Six

12th March 2016:
wow.your are keeping some of us in suspense.
please update it

Author's Response: Suspense is so fun! I love the thrill of wanting to know what comes next! I hope everyone likes the new chapter when it's posted next week! Thanks for reading! And I'm glad you like it!!

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Review #16, by Anna_ Chapter Five

10th March 2016:
I'm going to start this review by letting you know that you're my first ever fanfiction review. I just found the site 2 days ago and your story is the first one I read. I say this as a preface so you are aware that if I ramble (like I am now) it is only due to excitement and lack of experience. Instead of reviewing each chapter, I'm just going to leave one review here. To this date, this is the last chapter released.

I've got to say that the angle you took in this story was very creative indeed. It is my first dramione fanfic, but it instantly captured my heart and has made me more open to that possibilility of a romance (and has me contemplating writing one myself). The adoption angle, while I'm sure this is not the first time it has been used, was done creatively and made sense with the plot line - which is always a plus in my book.

Including arranged marriage and Hermione is always risky, but you show an in depth understanding of the character Rowling wrote and her thoughts, actions, and words reflect how I think she (Rowling) would have written her (Hermione).

Dracos struggle internally with this particular development was also really well written. He has always shown his desire to uphold his family traditions and values and now has to do so in a way he never would have imagined. And you show his internal struggles as he gets over his past opinions of Hermione and tries to create a bond with her that will make his marriage to her not only an obligation but a privilege. I really look forward to seeing where you take the story next.

You've made me a fan, not just of your story, but of the dramione relationship and even this site itself. So for that, I truly thank you.

Author's Response: I'd like to start off by welcoming you to the world of HPFF!

I can't even begin to thank you enough for your kind words about my writing. As someone that is a fan of Rowling, your words on her in regards to my writing are truly meaningful. When I began writing this particular story (dare I say it) back in 2008, I was so nervous that it wouldn't be accepted by the HP universe as a whole. I'm so glad that you have enjoyed this story so far! I truly hope that your enjoyment continues with each new chapter!

I'm actually having a hard time putting into words how much your review means to me and how awed I am that my story has touched you in such a way. As I said before, I can't begin to thank you enough! I'd like to take a second to encourage you to write a story of your own as well. Regardless of whether you post it anywhere, or not, if writing is something you feel like you'd like to do, go for it! There's nothing like the feeling you get when a project you've worked so hard on is finally completed!

HPFF is one of the best sites around for Harry Potter fiction. The readers, and fellow authors, are extremely helpful when needed and are always willing to give feedback and constructive criticism.

Again, thank you so much for your kind words! I wish you the best of luck in your future reading, and possible writing, endeavors!

Much love and appreciation,


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Review #17, by a fan Chapter Five

5th March 2016:
your story just gets better and better...

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)

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Review #18, by A fan Chapter Four

27th February 2016:
Wow. Very good can't wait to read about why they
left hermione with the grandgers

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! The reason behind Hermione being left with the Grangers is a really good one! I can't wait for everyone to read that chapter... BUT... that's for another day! Thank you for reading!!

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Review #19, by Cece Chapter Three

22nd February 2016:
I really like how she is not totally into the idea of having a new family and marrying Draco. It keeps her in character. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think it's a natural reaction for anyone to be wary and unsure when it comes to things like this. I know I wouldn't be so easy going about it. That's why I chose to write this that way. I'm so glad you like it! Next chapter should be up in a few days!

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Review #20, by a fan Chapter Three

20th February 2016:
love your story hurry up with chapter 4

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Don't worry, chapter 4 will be up next week!

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Review #21, by Mackie chandler Chapter Two

19th February 2016:
Please write more - this is so well done

Author's Response: There is much more to come! I'm actually about to post the next chapter! Keep a look out!!

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Review #22, by DaFossil Chapter One

13th February 2016:
This chapter should come with a tissue needed alert. Great story so far, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Awww! I will take that as a complement! :) I love when I can elicit emotions from a reader, regardless of what they are! Next chapter should be up next week! Thank you for reading!

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Review #23, by SimplyDelacour Chapter One

8th February 2016:
I'm really liking this s far, not boring at all. Though I am worried about the time it's set in, but oh well, I'm not the author. I'll keep reading none the less.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I hope your worries will lessen as each chapter comes out. Please feel free to tell me any thoughts you might have! I love feedback! :)

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