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Review #1, by acatnamedmouse Chapter 1

2nd April 2010:
awww so sweet and sad. i love what you wrote about sirius
"A man who suffered far more than was fair, but who never stopped laughing."

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Review #2, by meerkatalex Chapter 1

17th April 2008:
Aw, this story is beautiful. I love the idea of the statues around Hogwarts!

Author's Response: thank you!!

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Review #3, by moonlight_kaleidoscope Chapter 1

8th April 2008:
that was so sad!! my eyes started tearing up at the end of the first paragraph, at thee line 'families of those who had fought'… so freakin sad ;_; anyway, here are my impressions:
I liked that they made statues/plaques of Muggles – some of them really deserved it for going through that war and it’s really great that you made the wizards acknowledge that.
aww poor Professor McGonagall - reading that must've been the hardest thing she ever had to do. :(
what Harry said about Tonks, that was kind of funny in the midst of all the angst - a really nice touch. :]
I didn't particularly like what he said about Snape... I think something a bit deeper might've been more fitting. but hey, it's your story :)
okay, when I read about the plaque part, I almost started to cry. and I loved the paragraph before the last one - that's such a cool spell, and McGonagall =

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much! The feedback's really useful!

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Review #4, by TazWeasley Chapter 1

7th March 2008:
A siriusly brilliant story!! It made me laugh and cry.. Love it!! =)

Author's Response: Thanks!!

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Review #5, by indrajeet6 Chapter 1

5th March 2008:
fantastic!Amazing! i had to work hard to stop my tears from falling!!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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