You've got the years mixed up. Harry come's to Hogwats the first time in 1991.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's something that's getting fixed in my rewrite of the series. Thanks for pointing it out :)

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I did like it!
Very clever having it from Remus' POV.
I loved the part when there was hope in Sirius' eyes coz he heard Rachel was there. beautiful!
Can't wait to keep reading!
;D

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was a nice change to have Remus' POV in there for once.

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Sorry to be so repetitive, but I do enjoy how you show what Remus is thinking!
Loved the added comment from Rachel (on the map!)
;D

Author's Response: Don't worry about it, dear. ;) I love hearing your opinion on the chapter and its elements.

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I really enjoy reading it from Remus' perspective, you write it how I would've imagined him to see everything!
Another great chapter!
;D

Author's Response: Yay! That's good!
Thanks for the review! ^_^

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YAY! SIRIUS IS OUT!!!
and she still loves him.
naw.
Lovely chapter!
;D

Author's Response: Of course she still loves him! Who wouldn't? :P
Thanks again!

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Loved the extra scene with Rachel and Snape!
I thought the Christmas presents and the births of the babies was really sweet!
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Author's Response: Good! I'm glad you enjoyed that little bit.

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naw. their both pregnant. So sweet!
i think you've included her into the stories really well!
;D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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I think your idea of someone to help Harry is going to make it really interesting!
great chapter!
;D

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it'll make it interesting.

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woohoo. SHOPPING! yay.
another great chapter!
;D

Author's Response: Shopping is so amazing that I just had to include it. :p

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Another great chapter (of course!)
My favourite part was with the Mirror of Erised, so beautiful to show what she wanted. I loved the little children!
;D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was my favorite part too.

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I loved it! The story of when they got married was so well written! Brilliant!
10/10
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naw. the beginning bit (with Remus) was so sweet!
Loved the photos!
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Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the photos, too! Thanks for the review.

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bad bad bad. I think you've written them together really well and so sweetly, but I liked her better with Sirius!
Another fantastic chapter!
10/10
;D

Author's Response: I feel that exact same way, so don't worry.
Thanks!

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Great chapter! really well written, it flowed so well!
10/10
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including Frank and Alice was very clever!! argh, petunia is evil, but i thought having the weather again was a very clever idea. She isn't going to get with Remus is she?
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Author's Response: Thanks! I felt that Frank and Alice deserved their little moment there in the light. And as for Remus, you'll have to see...

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It was awesome! You showed how she felt about everything so well, i felt sad! Yes. Very mean about the baby. It was even sader (i think i just invented a word...) than Sirius going to Azkaban. Remus was so mean to him.
evil.
but great!
10/10
;D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's very rewarding to hear that the emotions of the characters affect the readers too.

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Yay! I can't wait until Rachel and Sirius meet up again!

Author's Response: You'll just have to read and find out when...

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Honestly, the wedding is probably tied for my favorite moments with the Sirius/Rachel proposal. I thought it was so sweet and well written.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!

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Wow, Remus and Rachel. Very cute. I still like Sirius and Rachel, though.

Author's Response: Yeah, I like Sirius/Rachel more too.

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Aw, this chapter made me cry! Very sad, but still extremely good chapter.

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Aww, I thought Rach would be there too! Great chapter though.

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I loved this story, and I loved this chapter! You are one of the best writers on this website, and I cannot wait to read the last two stories!
100/10

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I like how you had Rachel give the twins the map...nice twist

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Excellent chappy! I loved it!

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Yay! I can't wait until Rachel and Sirius get back together!

Author's Response: Soon...

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