So this is great. A bit odd, really, but great. I do hope you update, it'd be so great. So please update because I do just love this so. Report Review
So this is really entertaining. I love the characters and I pretty much always love Remus. So this is just great. Um, next chapter now. :] Report Review
Hehehehehe! It's great, Keep up the good work! Report Review
Good first chapter. Well written. I can hardly wait to read more.
Keep writing. Report Review
Haha Suck it up and deal with it. So great, it's a bit of a shame she had to cut her hair though. Oh well. I love how she was stirring Remus up.
"they were practically connected at the mouth!"
Haha, so great. I love her mother's little speech.
"Now dear, make sure to make good connections, you never know who might marry the future minister! And do try and grow a bust and a figure this year. I know if you just try hard enough you can do it!"
What I painful school that must be. I can't wait to read more.
IloveNeville.Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed writing that part, I would have been so upset if I'd have to cut my hair like that, but then, mine's short. Report Review
This is so totally awesome, keep up the good work!!Author's Response: I'm very sorry I'm going so slowly, but the sailing team just started and I've got drivers ed, things have just been piling up. Report Review
Wow, I'm excited to read more. In one chapter you've already got me hooked. She's going to Hogwarts how cool!! I wonder what the other marauders will think of her. Update real soon pleeease.Author's Response: I'm trying to go as fast as I can, but my mom came up for the week, and nothing gets done when she's around.
It's looking very good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love it!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Original plot! I like it! This could seriously get interesting if you put the effort into it! Please update!Author's Response: It might be awhile as I am working more on my other story Game On, soon to be renamed Mind Games. Report Review
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