wow, this story was AMAZING, and really happy.Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :) I am very glad you enjoyed reading it! Report Review
I love it I like all the memories and stuff. But the ending, are you going to conitune! I wanna know what happened. But if you don't continue I will just guess that htey worked out all right!:D Loved it!
50/50Author's Response: XD I hope u enjoyed the next chapter...thank u!! XD Report Review
Good job! loved the weaving in and out of memories. The only thing I have an issue with is the ending. It just...ends. it sounds more like a cliff hanger than an ending. Are you planing to write more? I'd love to know what happens. I hope they manage to work things out.Author's Response: :) ahahah thank you! The cliff hanger was on purpose because I wasn't sure which ending would better suit the story. :D But I think I will write more!! :)
thank u so much for the review! :)
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection