Nice one... Wish there could have been more Sirius, but that's me being biased towards my favourite character :P
Bless him, Ted is so sweet :D Report Review
Ooh... nice ending... Impressive. I like that Bella is already manipulative, although I thought Bella was the oldest... maybe that's just me :D
Nice one, keep it up :D Report Review
This makes me very happy! All I can say! I can't wait tell the next chapter. Ted is so nice. SIRIUS RULES! Can we see more Sirius? LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE one thousand times LOVE this story. WRITE MORE!!! 9/10. (Only because of spelling and grammer mistakes! *tease tease*)
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That chapter was even better! Since I wasted most of my thoughts on the first chapter I have nothing more to say. Whoa! Hold up! How could Dromeda be so freakin' stupid? She's lived with Bella all her live, did she really think she could trust her? I think it's sweet how Dromeda writes letters to Ted. I also love Dromeda's mum's reaction! It's quality, quality. I can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10!
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Oh,Oh, Oh. I don't know what to say. I really like it. I think it's interesting how you switch from Tonks/Lupin to Andromeda/Ted. I think it's very bloodiest of Dromeda to decide she can't like Ted because he's a muggle-born. Then again she was raised that way. I like how you said Tonks dated Charlie! I always thoght Bellatrix was the oldest. Hmm.
Anyways, love the story, 9/10
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I like it! please continue writing.Author's Response: certainly will Report Review
realy good writing. i always like reading about andromeda's and tonks relationship and how they met ect. keep it upAuthor's Response: Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter right now. Report Review
yes it does make me happy. VERY happy... its so cute. And i can imagine Teddy buying her clothes and shoes and taking her to the movies... thats so sweet!
thanks for writing this, its awesome!
10/10Author's Response: Well I had to get this chapter outn of the way... so I decided for it to happen over the holidays...
I'm glad you liked it. I can only imagine how many errors this one had. I couldn't sleep so I got up and wrote this... lol Report Review
Yes and I'm glad Ted and Andy finally talked and it was funny having her Apparate into a guy's bathroom. Wonder what the guys thought? LOL!
Hopefully, she doesn't get in too much trouble.Author's Response: I haven't decided how much trouble she'll be in as yet. She might be able to convince them that she changed her ways but I think they mind find the stack of letters though... I'm not sure if I should do that. It would be soooo mean.
Thanks for the review. Report Review
Bella is truly a wicked witch, and I'd hate to have her as my sister. Younger older or otherwise! I think Andy needs to just say to hell with her family and start seeing if Ted still likes her. Send the letters and see what he does, or just talk to him.
And somebody should knock Bella on her over privileged butt!
Oh by the way, did you ever finish reading The Very Best Thing? Cause I'm almost done posting the sequel, if you're interested.Author's Response: I think everyone would love to knock Bella off her privileged butt... Lol. I can't wait to write the next chapter of this... it's going to be fun...
Here's the thing... I read further than I actually reviewed... My net was down so I was saving in a cyber cafe and carrying it home to read on my computer... So I only have the last chapter to read... once I'm finsihed with that... I'll go back and review all that I didn't review.
My semester break is coming up... I'll be writing and reading like its going out of style...
You thought I forgot... ha ha... Nah, I'm just always like a couple chapters behind on everything... and you know I only like to read when I have time to sit and read out the entire chapter... the last chapter is like over 10000 so I'm having a hard time finding the time to read it... but I will so have time from friday. I'm droping all school books in a trunk. Report Review
Hey I really like this pairing, I haven't seen much of it and I think you do Andromeda and Ted realy well. Although wasn't Ted a Muggle in the books? No matter, it works just as well with him being a wizard Mudblood, to the Blacks that's probably worse.
Congratulations on getting trusted author status. How long did it take you? I'm wondering if I'll ever get it?Author's Response: yes, I'm trying something new... I usually don't write this at all but they can't all be Snape and Tonks...
Yeah... I thought Ted was a muggle too, I thought it said so in OOTP and that was one of my reasoning for Sev and Tonks making a good couple because they had similar backrounds but then someone burst my bubble and told me that he was actually muggle-born... I checked it on wiki... it's true. I think I'll have to pull out my OOTP and check again because to me Tonks said her dad was a muggle when she came with the advanced Guard...
Anywho.... Thanks for the review.
How long does it take to get trusted author... I have no idea... I've been on this site for more than a year and I have over 40 chapters of stories. I use to get rejected a lot in the earlies then I got a hang of it and I started to be over-cautious... then out the blue I got trusted author status. It's weird because I thougt I wouldn't get it because like two weeks before that I got rejected for something.
So keep posting you might get it soon. Report Review
Awww poor andy... and poor ted. lol. i knew bella would be that evil already. nice touch adding Lucius, Crabbe, Goyle and Lestrange! I like this chapter more than i liked the first one, so i hope all of the new chapters will be as good as this!Author's Response: I hope so too. I really don't like writing young pairings so I skipped the age. The next chapter will be sort of nice... then by the following chapter Cissy will start to Hogwarts... and in my stories she usually starts the same time with Snape, so I'll have some interaction there between all the Mauraders and Blacks. Report Review
Wow, this is really good so far, I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanks, I can't wait to write more. Report Review
I havent really seen that much of this pairing! congratulations on getting a trusted author status! Your writing is gettign much better but there are still a few things that you need to work on, like editing and spellcheck. I admit i have that problem too. I think that this could have been much longer, and its good to see a new story from you, but i'm getting all excited about a new chapter for flowers or the antique hoax! I dont think Dromeda would be that predjudiced against mudbloods, not the way i write her in the next chapter of my Long Road to Ruin. i'll be sure to keep checking all your stories for updates! 9/10Author's Response: I have always been horrible at spelling and things like that. I only spot it after its posted. The other chapters will be longer, this was just like an introduction.
And I already updated Antique Hoax and Flowers. I had just seen that Flowers had been updates so I immediately updated Antique Hoax then I notice it had already registered. I was like... hmm. Then I checked my inbox. I actually screamed. I have to admit I never thought I would get it. In the earlies, I submitted a lot of rejected chapters... Now I over warn just in case.
This chapter Dromeda's character is still based on what her family tells her. She is naturally sweet and nice but she still has that prejudice. After a while she is totally not going to care. Report Review
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