That was great! I love what Hermione says at the very end. Ron, Ron,Ron what are we going to do with you boy. Amazing Job!!! Report Review
This is really lovely. You write so well.Author's Response: This is one of my personel favourites, I had thought of making it longer but it seemed to find it's own end as I wrote it.
So again thnks for the review. Report Review
lol I love it. Excellent work. 10/10
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I really like this. I love that they would be too old to raise a family if Hermione waited for Harry to ask her!Author's Response: What I read from other writers all seem to point that way, there is this extremely odd idea that it is ok for Ron to see Hermione as more than a friend but then in the same story Harry is not allowed to think of her that way because she is his friend, to me this is one of the most stupid things you could put in a story, because what is ok for one should be ok for the other. Report Review
Oh now that was very original one-shot! I especially loved how Harry cofronted Ron at the Burrow! Thanks for posting this.Author's Response: Thanks for the good review I'm so pleased you like this story as I like it myself. Report Review
Aw! That was TOO cute! Ron is such a buthole, and I'm glad he was portrayed as 1 in this story. hehe. Trapped was amazing!
~HHrDanceLvRAuthor's Response: Thanks for the kind words, glad you liked it, thanks for taking time to review. Report Review
I loved that! What Harry did was so sweet! That's kind of what my sister had to go through before she died, but at least they kept her clean!Author's Response: Hi, sorry to hear about your sister, I lost my little brother in similar settings, I think thats where the idea came from, though I have to admit he too was kept clean, anyway thanks for being one of the very few who have reviewed this one shot, maybe my regular readers don't like this type of story. again thanks. Report Review
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