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Review #1, by albus22  The Cave

11th July 2010:
ooo this is so creepy! but in a good way of course--not that I condone his actions. but you did a superb job with the characterization. bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for leaving a review. Hearing that you found it creepy made me really happy. :)

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Review #2, by Misty_Rey The Cave

15th March 2008:
This one-shot had much better descriptions than your previous fics, which I liked alot. I've never read a fanfic that explored what happened in that cave so good on you for taking an interesting event and elaborating on it! I hate to be a buzzkill and I wouldn't be surprised if you hate me -winces- but according to HBP, pg 251, it was Amy Benson and Dennis Hopper who went into the cave with Tom and became 'a bit funny'. Thought you should know that. I'm mean, if you want to stick to canon that is. If you don't than that's perfectly fine. I really enjoyed everything else though, the descriptions and elaborations were well-done as was the characterizations of the children, especially Tom which was pretty frightening.

Author's Response: Ouch! But thank you so very much for telling me what I missed about the cave. It isn't canon, but I still decided not to edit this story. Also, thank you for leaving such a detailed review, I loved hearing your opinion and am very glad you liked this one-shot.

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Review #3, by Buttercup The Cave

11th February 2008:
You have a wonderful uptake on the boy Lord Voldemort and you really do start to hate him when he forces Linda to lie! It was a great, and well written story.
5 Stars.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so glad that you think I write Tom well, since I found it difficult to imagine what he was like as a child.

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