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Review #1, by PensiveGal88 A birthday and the first meeting.

13th February 2008:
Your story has really great potential and I'm enjoying it very much. Just a suggestion though; I would make Taylor a little more subtle when it comes to her dialogue with Harry. If you have her pile on the compliments she tends to read a little phony, which I'm sure is not your intention. Anyways I can't wait to see what you do next and I hope to read more from you soon. I expect great things from you! LOL =)

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